I don't quite know if this is the right place to ask but I'm kinda stuck. I've looked on the internet and can't seem to find anyting relevant to my problem with this paragrath.
The bandit dropped his bow which hit the stone ground making a large thump. Sotek glanced across to the other bandit, but luckily he was still sitting there. If he had heard anything, he certainly didn’t react. He didn’t bother looking up what so ever. Even when Sotek picked up the bow and recovered some arrows from the dead archer, he didn’t move. When an arrow was sent towards him, he didn’t even flinch.
Is it me, or is the word 'Didn't' overused here? I count 4 times. I'm looking for any ideas of other words I can use.
Sotek. Loyal Hound Of Hircine
I don't quite know if this is the right place to ask but I'm kinda stuck. I've looked on the internet and can't seem to find anyting relevant to my problem with this paragrath.
The bandit dropped his bow which hit the stone ground making a large thump. Sotek glanced across to the other bandit, but luckily he was still sitting there. If he had heard anything, he certainly didn’t react. He didn’t bother looking up what so ever. Even when Sotek picked up the bow and recovered some arrows from the dead archer, he didn’t move. When an arrow was sent towards him, he didn’t even flinch.
Is it me, or is the word 'Didn't' overused here? I count 4 times. I'm looking for any ideas of other words I can use.
Sotek. Loyal Hound Of Hircine