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• The Long-Chapper

  

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  April 26, 2016

  read it and liked it. Replace "dastard" in the first page with "bastard" I think?  3000 is a lot for Nimhe, good times. 

  read it and liked it. Replace "dastard" in the first page with "bastard" I think?  3000 is a lot for Nimhe, good times. 

• The Wing

  

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  April 26, 2016

  I didn't realise people had answered, so I went ahead and downloaded it yesterday and did some proofreading today.  Here it is, if you still have need of it. It's just proofreading as I'm not very good at offering actual suggestions.

  I didn't realise people had answered, so I went ahead and downloaded it yesterday and did some proofreading today.  Here it is, if you still have need of it. It's just proofreading as I'm not very good at offering actual suggestions.

• Sotek

  

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  April 26, 2016

  Don't worry yourself Rancid. I'm sure Ben will be gratefull of your time and effort in checking his work. The more eyes the better.

  Don't worry yourself Rancid. I'm sure Ben will be gratefull of your time and effort in checking his work. The more eyes the better.

• Ben W

  

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  April 26, 2016

  Thank you guys for all your suggestions. They've given me much to think over. And yes Rancid, Sotek is correct in saying that I'm very grateful for anyone's time to see if there's anything wrong. 

  Thank you guys for all your suggestions. They've given me much to think over. And yes Rancid, Sotek is correct in saying that I'm very grateful for anyone's time to see if there's anything wrong. 

• Lyall

  

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  May 10, 2016

  Can you guys take a look at this? Thanks 

  Can you guys take a look at this? Thanks 

• The Wing

  

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  May 11, 2016

  I added my edits as suggestions so that you can choose whether or not to accept them. Everything was perfect except for some weird tense-switching.

  I added my edits as suggestions so that you can choose whether or not to accept them. Everything was perfect except for some weird tense-switching.

• Deleted Member

  
   

  May 11, 2016

  My daughter convinced me to give Camp NaNoWriMo a try last month and this is the result. It's pretty much one long (25 page) stream of consciousness. Any feedback would be awesome. Thanks!

  My daughter convinced me to give Camp NaNoWriMo a try last month and this is the result. It's pretty much one long (25 page) stream of consciousness. Any feedback would be awesome. Thanks!

• Sotek

  

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  May 11, 2016

  Camp NaNo and NaNoWriMo (November) are two events we cover in Tamriel Tales. Hope you join in with us in November. I will give this a read but it's a fair size so don't expect a responce soon. You done well writing this amount, shame you wern't in one of our camps.

  Camp NaNo 2016

  Just for the record, You a 'Hircine Hound' or a 'Cannibal Hippy' type of guy?

  Sotek Loyal Hound Of Hircine.

  Camp NaNo and NaNoWriMo (November) are two events we cover in Tamriel Tales. Hope you join in with us in November. I will give this a read but it's a fair size so don't expect a responce soon. You done well writing this amount, shame you wern't in one of our camps.

  Camp NaNo 2016

  Just for the record, You a 'Hircine Hound' or a 'Cannibal Hippy' type of guy?

  Sotek Loyal Hound Of Hircine.

• Lyall

  

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  May 11, 2016

  *Shh* Don't tell Sotek, but be a Cannibal Hippy. We like pretty flowers, trees, and writing with the blood of our foes.

  *Shh* Don't tell Sotek, but be a Cannibal Hippy. We like pretty flowers, trees, and writing with the blood of our foes.

• Lyall

  

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  May 11, 2016

  Thank you! I've been told I tend to switch tenses a lot, I probably should try to stop that.

  Thank you! I've been told I tend to switch tenses a lot, I probably should try to stop that.