A very good build David (and my comment has nothing to do with being a fan of Underworld movies )! You detail everything well, not excessive but at the same time not lacking, your presentation is very good with awesome screenshots! I also love the inclusion of Harkon's sword - reminds me of Victor's sword which Selene uses to kill him
You can safely remove the last special move, since it's not actually special - it's just a perk. I'd also mention the soul gem required for capturing werewolf/werebear soul - UESP says they are lesser/common correspondingly. I'd also single out the gameplay section as it is now somewhat lost in the midst of skill descriptions. And I'd also elaborate a little less on the quests that can be done by the character. You explain why they can be fitting the character, although for many of them it's self-evident. Instead focus on how your character behaves in the midst of townsfolk, does she view them as just food or tries to protect them (like Selene, what you'd have wrote about her). And one last point, you write about Death Dealer as about a male character but have female character in all pictures and people familiar with the movies will more likely imagine a female character when thinking about Death Dealers.
P.S. The italic text is just my small suggestion which I fear is wrong. I haven't posted any builds so, naturally, might be wrong in what the people seek to see in the build
A very good build David (and my comment has nothing to do with being a fan of Underworld movies )! You detail everything well, not excessive but at the same time not lacking, your presentation is very good with awesome screenshots! I also love the inclusion of Harkon's sword - reminds me of Victor's sword which Selene uses to kill him
You can safely remove the last special move, since it's not actually special - it's just a perk. I'd also mention the soul gem required for capturing werewolf/werebear soul - UESP says they are lesser/common correspondingly. I'd also single out the gameplay section as it is now somewhat lost in the midst of skill descriptions. And I'd also elaborate a little less on the quests that can be done by the character. You explain why they can be fitting the character, although for many of them it's self-evident. Instead focus on how your character behaves in the midst of townsfolk, does she view them as just food or tries to protect them (like Selene, what you'd have wrote about her). And one last point, you write about Death Dealer as about a male character but have female character in all pictures and people familiar with the movies will more likely imagine a female character when thinking about Death Dealers.
P.S. The italic text is just my small suggestion which I fear is wrong. I haven't posted any builds so, naturally, might be wrong in what the people seek to see in the build