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TOC A Dance with Daedra (ADwD)

• Exuro

  

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  February 7, 2016

  Thanks, haha ya Tilma's a great character. I do find it annoying that at skyrim only uses 1 body model.

  Thanks, haha ya Tilma's a great character. I do find it annoying that at skyrim only uses 1 body model.
• The Long-Chapper

  

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  February 7, 2016

  hehe, yeah. Now, I liked that my kitty in ESO could have a pooch. That pleased me to no end. 

  hehe, yeah. Now, I liked that my kitty in ESO could have a pooch. That pleased me to no end. 

• Exuro

  

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  March 25, 2016

  Update: I changed the overview for the TOC to more accurate awesomeness.

  March was chaotic for me, but April is looking good. Highlights include: two transmissions dying on me, a job interview, and turning into a turtle! No joke:

  

  I have 2 chapters drafted for ADWD, but probably won't post any until May since I'm doing Camp NaNo over April. I'll probably have trouble hitting 10k words just drafting, so I was smart and went for a 20k goal! I should be able to get a Vitus and Friends posted sometime in April though and whenever I post the Arc I&II Recap, you'll know the ADWD Arc III will soon follow.

  Update: I changed the overview for the TOC to more accurate awesomeness.

  March was chaotic for me, but April is looking good. Highlights include: two transmissions dying on me, a job interview, and turning into a turtle! No joke:

  

  I have 2 chapters drafted for ADWD, but probably won't post any until May since I'm doing Camp NaNo over April. I'll probably have trouble hitting 10k words just drafting, so I was smart and went for a 20k goal! I should be able to get a Vitus and Friends posted sometime in April though and whenever I post the Arc I&II Recap, you'll know the ADWD Arc III will soon follow.

• Exuro

  

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  March 29, 2016

  I couldn't resist posting something so the Recap is up. Guess that means I'll be editing the first few Arc III chapters and posting before April.

  I couldn't resist posting something so the Recap is up. Guess that means I'll be editing the first few Arc III chapters and posting before April.

• The Wing

  

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  April 12, 2016

  I can't believe I had forgotten to like this table of contents for so long... 

  I can't believe I had forgotten to like this table of contents for so long... 

• The Wing

  

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  April 12, 2016

  Hey man, I honestly didn't even notice that you don't go into a lot of detail with regards to character appearances. If anyone should be asking this question, it should be me.  Except, well, I already know the answer.

  Amari/Kaera I see as a short, lanky, unattractive girl with a small face, round brown eyes that turn honey-coloured in the sunlight and straight black hair falling over her shoulder blades. When I say 'straight', I mean it would be straight if she had the opportunity to maintain it - instead it's pretty much a rat's nest.

  Somehow I missed Silver/Trebonde/Valus' introductory description - I think it's because I was hurrying to catch up to your most recent chapter at the time - so in the early chapters I saw him as rather cheetah-like, very lean beneath a sleek layer of muscle and only slightly tanned, sandy-haired and with a snide, pointy face. After chapter thirteen that began to change when I read his description, and now he has gotten a lot darker in hair, skin and eyes, and his nose has become significantly more manly and less ratty. 

  I don't know man, I just don't trust that guy. He speaks and acts like a kid I used to detest in middle school.  He's been all right in the last few chapters, but now he has a daedric murder mace and I really hope Amari/Kaera is as wary as I am.

  Hey man, I honestly didn't even notice that you don't go into a lot of detail with regards to character appearances. If anyone should be asking this question, it should be me.  Except, well, I already know the answer.

  Amari/Kaera I see as a short, lanky, unattractive girl with a small face, round brown eyes that turn honey-coloured in the sunlight and straight black hair falling over her shoulder blades. When I say 'straight', I mean it would be straight if she had the opportunity to maintain it - instead it's pretty much a rat's nest.

  Somehow I missed Silver/Trebonde/Valus' introductory description - I think it's because I was hurrying to catch up to your most recent chapter at the time - so in the early chapters I saw him as rather cheetah-like, very lean beneath a sleek layer of muscle and only slightly tanned, sandy-haired and with a snide, pointy face. After chapter thirteen that began to change when I read his description, and now he has gotten a lot darker in hair, skin and eyes, and his nose has become significantly more manly and less ratty. 

  I don't know man, I just don't trust that guy. He speaks and acts like a kid I used to detest in middle school.  He's been all right in the last few chapters, but now he has a daedric murder mace and I really hope Amari/Kaera is as wary as I am.

• The Long-Chapper

  

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  April 12, 2016

  HAHA, this made me laugh, Rancid. You should do a thread with descriptions of characters according to you. 

  HAHA, this made me laugh, Rancid. You should do a thread with descriptions of characters according to you. 

• The Wing

  

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  April 12, 2016

  XD No way dude, I'd never be able to stop! And that's just the visual perception. I love Amari but she has a surprisingly annoying voice!

  XD No way dude, I'd never be able to stop! And that's just the visual perception. I love Amari but she has a surprisingly annoying voice!

• The Long-Chapper

  

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  April 12, 2016

  That's the point, we wouldn't want you to stop and all would be very entertained.  

  That's the point, we wouldn't want you to stop and all would be very entertained.  

• Exuro

  

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  April 12, 2016

  Happens to the best of us. Thanks for the like!

  Happens to the best of us. Thanks for the like!