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  • Exuro
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    August 22, 2015

    This is my 1st work of fiction, and while I know it can still improve a lot I'm happy with how it's progressing. Don't sell yourself short! I often look at your work for ideas, both in story and for writing.

    Yeah, I always tried to avoid the professors and admin during the 1st week of classes. I need to start studying for my license, so I have that added to my schedule now too.

    Hermeaus Mora is my favorite Prince and I wanted emphasize the cost his support throughout the DLC came at.

  • The Long-Chapper
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    August 22, 2015

    Yeah, I intend for Albee to complete Dragonborn, barring any major gameplay bugs. Xarxes, served both Auri-El and Hermaeus Mora and Albee has referred to himself as like Xarxes on several occasions. How much will this drive for knowledge cost him? How will Hermaeus Mora address the one who read and committed to memory the library of Crystal-Like-Law? 

    I am the professor! I need to get syllabi done and all that fun stuff. Schedule students. The first week is crazy!

  • Exuro
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    August 22, 2015

    I like that comparison, Xarxes was a very interesting character. I could see Albee accidentally spending a 100 years or more in Apocrypha.

    I always found the 1st week fairly relaxing when I was student

  • The Long-Chapper
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    August 22, 2015

    The way he gets distracted? I wouldn't put it past him.

    We take our revenge during finals week. Muhuahuahua. 

  • Exuro
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    September 6, 2015

    Updated Chapter 1. Did a bit of cleanup and word choice, and fleshed out the flashback of her parents.

  • Exuro
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    September 14, 2015

    Update: Done with the draft for the first chapter in Arc II, it was a hard one to write. I'll be editing it throughout this week.

  • The Long-Chapper
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    September 14, 2015

    That's great news! Look forward to reading it. 

  • Exuro
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    September 14, 2015

    Thanks, I have Arc II and Arc III outlined fairly well now. Arc IV is still vague points and goals, here's to hoping I wont need to back edit as it comes into focus.

  • Exuro
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    October 25, 2015

    Update! Chapter 9 is up, did minor edits to Chapters 2-7 (nothing story changing, mostly typo type things), and added pictures to Ch.'s 2&3.

  • Exuro
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    November 27, 2015

    I caught up posting my backlog, now it'll be back to my normal periodic postings.


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