Wow, this is a lot to take in. You should definitely add that table of contents with a one or two sentences description of each section. It will bring everything together and people will know from the start what you build is all about. Other than that, I'm a sucker for a good redemption story. Fantastic work! 

Thank you.  I'm glad you like it.

Thank you Noodles.  I'm glad some of the more established build creators of this group are appreciating my work.  It's gratifying.

And I will definitely put that table of contents in as soon as I have some more time.  It's too bad we can't link to a specific part of a post, or that would make navigating large builds even easier.

I'll take a look at it.  Fallen paladins are always fun. I'm still highly unlikely to change to 5th edition though.  I'm sort of ingrained with Pathfinder now, and teaching my son to play with those rules.  Don't want to change him up midway through.

This is an amazing build you have here! Presentation, depth, backstory. You really have it going on! congratulations on releasing your first build. You even got the upper class of builders astonished and surprised on this! Its increditable. Don't worry for the build to being lengthy, A.) To get that perfect blend of elements in a build like this is going to be par for the course. Who cares if it is lengthy, tough tomatoes for those screwballs. B.) It was worth it in everyway. This build will be featured in a spotlight in the future, I guarantee it!

Keep the good times rollin'. I graciously look forward to your next build you post!

Thank you.  Glad you liked it.

It will be a little while before I post another build since I want to play this one for a while yet.  I have a few ideas for some things, though I need to do more in-depth searching to make sure no one has posted something like them before.

Two-handed!

That was one of the things I wanted to try out.  There aren't a whole lot of crusader type builds (or vampire builds) that use two-handed.  Yes he starts out as spell and board, but the transition to two-handed offense fits the character well.  He's not your typical knight/crusader.

All right, the Graveknight has been updated with a table of contents now.  And once again I studied your Twilight of Meridia presentation. 

If anyone is interested in the story aspect of the Graveknight I have added a story blog link up at the top of this build to the The Graveknight's Oath table of contents.  The prologue is already up, with chapter 1 to be posted tomorrow (since forum rules prohibit posting more than one blog post a day).