Your atistic talent is great! But now, onto the build...

You have everything you need here for a build but I really don't like how you presented it. There's a fair few spelling and grammar errors, as well as some spacing issues (like in the title).

That too

oh god you are right...ill correct it right away :)

you think so?hmm its not a bad idea...not a bad idea at all

The thing is that i made the build as a word file first and i though i'd be ok with a copy paste.But i found out i cant do that so i had some difficulties to write all this stuff.So ill try to correct anything i can for now in this build and ill try my best in the next one..

what about them???

You should work on fixing this one before doing another. It shows you are committed to fixing the problems, rather then ignoring them

To do that i just press the add discussion button at the skyrim art group and put some of my drawings there?

i first saw this, and was immediately turned off by the name, especially without proper capitals.

However, i kept reading, and you did a really good job at presenting this build. Sure, the start up paragraphs were not really to MY liking, but they did add a bit more originality to the basic, "Vampires attack, survivor is angry." backstory. Great presentation, I would just change to title to "The Holy Pyromancer" I find that pyromancer has been used a lot by many people, maybe something more original could help out a bit :)

OVerall though, i like your layout and content, good build :D