Anyways, here are some post after effects

+1 cause the deadpool pic

This is quite good, for a first attempt. A couple of pointers: 1. Sort out the perkspread. Change the background for something else, and maybe make the text bigger on the new one. Try deviantart or just plain old google images for artwork. 2. The "Special Moves." These can make or break a build, and really, those moves aren't special. A special move should be a significant and important combo of abilities unique to only your build, and it must actually accomplish something. Just a simple shout or power doesn't make a special move or combo.

1. Yeah, I think that's been established as the big weakness of the build entry. Fortunately that's only cosmetic and when I get some time I'll fix it for sure.

2. Agreed. I researched many builds from Bloodworks to Legendary and this was consistently one of the peeves of the critiques was including special moves that were not special. That's why I made no attempt at doing this. I simply thought back to what moves or combo were most frequently used with this character and named them 'significant'. I did not intend for readers to think that they were special. Maybe this is just a matter of interpretation. If I am misleading people I'll remove that section if readers think it would help. Thanks for the feedback.

Sorry man. Looks like you were the only fan of the pic, so I took the majority advice and changed it.

DONE. I made edits to the cosmetics only, but those seem to be my biggest hangups. Hope the changes are better received.

He's a Dunmer for me :X

It might look good to include 1 of the pictures I edited for you, probably above "Important Quests" to break up the text a bit, would improve the presentation.

This one looks good I think.

Thanks Jake. I think I'll do that or something similar.

I like(+1) your "essential" vampire and even its lore.