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Straag Rod (The Turning Wheel): Book 1

• Mirric

  

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  December 22, 2015

  So when you do Oblivion will you recreate Albee? You can easily make him pale and give him a top knot.

  So when you do Oblivion will you recreate Albee? You can easily make him pale and give him a top knot.

• The Long-Chapper

  

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  December 22, 2015

  He's already pale and well, had a top-knot. LOL, should totally make him a jedi, but blah, been writing not playing. 

  He's already pale and well, had a top-knot. LOL, should totally make him a jedi, but blah, been writing not playing. 

• Exuro

  

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  December 22, 2015

  I tried Arena, but the UI interface is just to clunky for me to enjoy the game. Wonder if there's a mod that revamps it like Doom2 has...

  I tried Arena, but the UI interface is just to clunky for me to enjoy the game. Wonder if there's a mod that revamps it like Doom2 has...

• Exuro

  

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  December 22, 2015

  Ah 1st and 3rd google results:

  http://www.nexusmods.com/tesarena/mods/1/?

  might have to give this another try.

  Ah 1st and 3rd google results:

  http://www.nexusmods.com/tesarena/mods/1/?

  might have to give this another try.

• The Long-Chapper

  

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  December 22, 2015

  Yeah, interface has to work for me too. Good find. 

  Yeah, interface has to work for me too. Good find. 

• Lyall

  

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  December 31, 2015

  I just finished reading the whole series, and I have one thing to say: You better hurry up with those edits, because this was amazing.

  I just finished reading the whole series, and I have one thing to say: You better hurry up with those edits, because this was amazing.

• The Long-Chapper

  

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  December 31, 2015

  Thank you Lyall.   Part 2 of Book 1 will be released soon. Look for an image to be posted with more information. 

  Thank you Lyall.   Part 2 of Book 1 will be released soon. Look for an image to be posted with more information. 

• Lyall

  

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  December 31, 2015

  This has been a huge help to me, as I'm releasing a short story for AMOST3, and I have a long story in the making. I'm convinced my work is 10x better then it would be if I didn't read this. One thing, though. I notice you tend to write like this:

  "Sure, of course," Said Aela,

  "Anything else you need?"

  While most write it like this: "Sure, of course," Said Aela, "Anything else you need?"

  But honestly, this is surpassing most (If not all) books I've read, keep it up!

  This has been a huge help to me, as I'm releasing a short story for AMOST3, and I have a long story in the making. I'm convinced my work is 10x better then it would be if I didn't read this. One thing, though. I notice you tend to write like this:

  "Sure, of course," Said Aela,

  "Anything else you need?"

  While most write it like this: "Sure, of course," Said Aela, "Anything else you need?"

  But honestly, this is surpassing most (If not all) books I've read, keep it up!

• The Long-Chapper

  

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  January 1, 2016

  I tend to like separating thoughts, but that lol, that particular one may have been an error if that is indeed how a few of those came out. If they're continuing something like that, I would have put that in one sentence. I will break up separate ideas, however. I don't like long paragraphs and a lot of the problems I had in the beginning were overly long paragraphs with dialogue embedded, often featuring two characters. I've striven to fix that, and then, lol, went the other way. Finding a happy medium now. I'm still growing too. 

  I tend to like separating thoughts, but that lol, that particular one may have been an error if that is indeed how a few of those came out. If they're continuing something like that, I would have put that in one sentence. I will break up separate ideas, however. I don't like long paragraphs and a lot of the problems I had in the beginning were overly long paragraphs with dialogue embedded, often featuring two characters. I've striven to fix that, and then, lol, went the other way. Finding a happy medium now. I'm still growing too. 

• The Long-Chapper

  

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  January 1, 2016

  Blah, blah, blah. You know it's coming and all that jazz. I likey the blueness of it, don't you? Is different from my other peechurs. And fiances gave me the Photoshops so I played. *jumps up and down in glee*. Happy New Year to Tamriel Tales!  

  

  Blah, blah, blah. You know it's coming and all that jazz. I likey the blueness of it, don't you? Is different from my other peechurs. And fiances gave me the Photoshops so I played. *jumps up and down in glee*. Happy New Year to Tamriel Tales!