This has been a huge help to me, as I'm releasing a short story for AMOST3, and I have a long story in the making. I'm convinced my work is 10x better then it would be if I didn't read this. One thing, though. I notice you tend to write like this:
"Sure, of course," Said Aela,
"Anything else you need?"
While most write it like this: "Sure, of course," Said Aela, "Anything else you need?"
But honestly, this is surpassing most (If not all) books I've read, keep it up!
This has been a huge help to me, as I'm releasing a short story for AMOST3, and I have a long story in the making. I'm convinced my work is 10x better then it would be if I didn't read this. One thing, though. I notice you tend to write like this:
"Sure, of course," Said Aela,
"Anything else you need?"
While most write it like this: "Sure, of course," Said Aela, "Anything else you need?"
But honestly, this is surpassing most (If not all) books I've read, keep it up!