Ah 1st and 3rd google results:
http://www.nexusmods.com/tesarena/mods/1/?
might have to give this another try.
Ah 1st and 3rd google results:
http://www.nexusmods.com/tesarena/mods/1/?
might have to give this another try.
This has been a huge help to me, as I'm releasing a short story for AMOST3, and I have a long story in the making. I'm convinced my work is 10x better then it would be if I didn't read this. One thing, though. I notice you tend to write like this:
"Sure, of course," Said Aela,
"Anything else you need?"
While most write it like this: "Sure, of course," Said Aela, "Anything else you need?"
But honestly, this is surpassing most (If not all) books I've read, keep it up!
This has been a huge help to me, as I'm releasing a short story for AMOST3, and I have a long story in the making. I'm convinced my work is 10x better then it would be if I didn't read this. One thing, though. I notice you tend to write like this:
"Sure, of course," Said Aela,
"Anything else you need?"
While most write it like this: "Sure, of course," Said Aela, "Anything else you need?"
But honestly, this is surpassing most (If not all) books I've read, keep it up!
I tend to like separating thoughts, but that lol, that particular one may have been an error if that is indeed how a few of those came out. If they're continuing something like that, I would have put that in one sentence. I will break up separate ideas, however. I don't like long paragraphs and a lot of the problems I had in the beginning were overly long paragraphs with dialogue embedded, often featuring two characters. I've striven to fix that, and then, lol, went the other way. Finding a happy medium now. I'm still growing too.
I tend to like separating thoughts, but that lol, that particular one may have been an error if that is indeed how a few of those came out. If they're continuing something like that, I would have put that in one sentence. I will break up separate ideas, however. I don't like long paragraphs and a lot of the problems I had in the beginning were overly long paragraphs with dialogue embedded, often featuring two characters. I've striven to fix that, and then, lol, went the other way. Finding a happy medium now. I'm still growing too.
Blah, blah, blah. You know it's coming and all that jazz. I likey the blueness of it, don't you? Is different from my other peechurs. And fiances gave me the Photoshops so I played. *jumps up and down in glee*. Happy New Year to Tamriel Tales!
Blah, blah, blah. You know it's coming and all that jazz. I likey the blueness of it, don't you? Is different from my other peechurs. And fiances gave me the Photoshops so I played. *jumps up and down in glee*. Happy New Year to Tamriel Tales!