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Character Build: The Commander of Realms

• Pabbylink

  

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  April 8, 2015

  What I quite like about this build is using necromancy, which is normally used for more evil or vampiric builds, for an undead fighter.

  What I quite like about this build is using necromancy, which is normally used for more evil or vampiric builds, for an undead fighter.

• Daedric Priest

  

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  April 22, 2015

  Hey, Thanks for the like!!

  Yeah hate playing a vampire!!

  Hey, Thanks for the like!!

  Yeah hate playing a vampire!!
• Curse Never Dying

  

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  April 22, 2015

  I noticed your writing style as you explain this build reads more like conversational English (ie: run on sentences and broken sentences). This makes many sections of the build more difficult to read than it should. I recommend rewriting everything to sound more concise, and simple. Go for the least amount of words needed to clearly convey your concept.

  I noticed your writing style as you explain this build reads more like conversational English (ie: run on sentences and broken sentences). This makes many sections of the build more difficult to read than it should. I recommend rewriting everything to sound more concise, and simple. Go for the least amount of words needed to clearly convey your concept.
• Daedric Priest

  

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  April 22, 2015

  Hi Curse, thanks for your comment. 
  Can you point out a particular section? I tried to incorporate roleplay too inside the Build section, maybe that's why it's seeming like more of a guide? 
  
  Btw I was just reading your Samurai to get an idea to present my next one. 

  Hi Curse, thanks for your comment. 
  Can you point out a particular section? I tried to incorporate roleplay too inside the Build section, maybe that's why it's seeming like more of a guide? 
  
  Btw I was just reading your Samurai to get an idea to present my next one. 

• Curse Never Dying

  

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  April 22, 2015

  Its hard to list a particular example, but you want to cut out any words that dont contribute to better understanding what you're trying to convey. 

  I also feel like the backstory could be broken up into small paragraphs. The large block of text is unappealing. Place that picture you have below the backstory above it to draw readers in.

  Its hard to list a particular example, but you want to cut out any words that dont contribute to better understanding what you're trying to convey. 

  I also feel like the backstory could be broken up into small paragraphs. The large block of text is unappealing. Place that picture you have below the backstory above it to draw readers in.

• Daedric Priest

  

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  April 23, 2015

  Hi Curse, Rewrote few texts & adjusted the spacings, pl respond.

  Hi Curse, Rewrote few texts & adjusted the spacings, pl respond.

• Curse Never Dying

  

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  April 23, 2015

  It is looking a lot better. Good job. 

  It is looking a lot better. Good job. 

• Daedric Priest

  

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  April 25, 2015

  Thanks alot, Curse!!

  

  Thanks alot, Curse!!

  

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  August 17, 2015

  What is this Summoned Daedric Armor? But awesome build.

  What is this Summoned Daedric Armor? But awesome build.
• Fevnall

  

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  August 17, 2015

  You can summon Daedric armors and weapons through the Atronach forge but it requires you to get a sigil stone. This is obtained during the master Conjuration quest. If memory serves, unenchanted items require their ebony equivalent, daedra heart, dwarven centurion dynamo core, and a black soul gem. For enchanted items same thing but add some void salts. And unenchanted daedra boots are bugged to create the dremora type which is unwearable as the character.

  You can summon Daedric armors and weapons through the Atronach forge but it requires you to get a sigil stone. This is obtained during the master Conjuration quest. If memory serves, unenchanted items require their ebony equivalent, daedra heart, dwarven centurion dynamo core, and a black soul gem. For enchanted items same thing but add some void salts. And unenchanted daedra boots are bugged to create the dremora type which is unwearable as the character.