"Also, what exactly was it that you found confusing?"
Well, I said confusing but what I really meant was 'i'm just not reading that'.
Some of the sections here will give people eyestrain due the constant use of bold in the paragraphs...it makes it a jolting read.
I was right with you down to the equipment section and then that table with titles that contradicted the equipment section just put me right off, I knew I'd have to study every word in order to fully understand the character so my brain just stopped at that point...
I understood 'the paths of knowledge' but found them fairly redundant and again, just hard to read in general. They have been presented in a way that looks important.......but then you finish reading them and realize that they aren't important at all.
These are just presentation issues...and they always vary from person to person...
...I'm more of a concept person and I LOOOVE your overall concept!
"Also, what exactly was it that you found confusing?"
Well, I said confusing but what I really meant was 'i'm just not reading that'.
Some of the sections here will give people eyestrain due the constant use of bold in the paragraphs...it makes it a jolting read.
I was right with you down to the equipment section and then that table with titles that contradicted the equipment section just put me right off, I knew I'd have to study every word in order to fully understand the character so my brain just stopped at that point...
I understood 'the paths of knowledge' but found them fairly redundant and again, just hard to read in general. They have been presented in a way that looks important.......but then you finish reading them and realize that they aren't important at all.
These are just presentation issues...and they always vary from person to person...
...I'm more of a concept person and I LOOOVE your overall concept!