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Event Build: The Disgraced Protector

• Rabiul Mazumder

  

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  February 9, 2015

  Problem was that Krosis has good enchantments (archery) but doesn't look like his mask but nahkrin looked like the mask. Also nahkrin in dragon tongue means vengeance  which made it even better.

  Problem was that Krosis has good enchantments (archery) but doesn't look like his mask but nahkrin looked like the mask. Also nahkrin in dragon tongue means vengeance  which made it even better.

• Rabiul Mazumder

  

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  February 9, 2015

  I'm really not a good writer but I'll ask my sis to help she's gd at writing.

  I'm really not a good writer but I'll ask my sis to help she's gd at writing.

• Nevik Drakel

  

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  February 9, 2015

  Aldr Oldon was the royal protector of Torygg. Aldr was there when Ulfric killed the high king. He was captured by one of the Stormcloak's and the solider had a knife pointing toward his back. He was forced to act like he was on their side. People thought that he was one of Ulfric's supporters. So when Ulfric killed Torygg the guards captured as many Stormcloak's as they can. Sadly they actually believed Aldr aided them so they captured him too. They threw him into the Solitude jail but he saw that the wall in his cell was crumbling.He knocked it down and it fell, leading a way out. He finds a chest with his belongings in it and picks the lock. He opened it and takes his stuff and escapes. He crossed the border to flee at Darkwater Pass but was captured along with some Stormcloaks. To his surprise Ulfric was there. Unfortunately, his hands being bound, he couldn't claim his revenge. As his head was on the chopping block a dragon came attacking providing a way out. Aldr took Hadvar's side and escaped jail again. As he escaped he took this as a second chance and continued on his life as a adventurer. Later Aldr finds out he is Dragonborn a man able to speak the dragon's language at ease and absorb their souls. On a quest he is attacked by a Dragon priest and kill's it. He obtains it's mask while digging through it's ashes. Aldr decided that he'll try to clear his name by joining the Civil War in Skyrim aiding the Imperial's. To hide his face he'd wear the Dragon Priest mask he found. He'll be honored again and will be able to live without hiding. I'll start re typing this, to what I think sounds good.

  Aldr Oldon was the royal protector of Torygg. Aldr was there when Ulfric killed the high king. He was captured by one of the Stormcloak's and the solider had a knife pointing toward his back. He was forced to act like he was on their side. People thought that he was one of Ulfric's supporters. So when Ulfric killed Torygg the guards captured as many Stormcloak's as they can. Sadly they actually believed Aldr aided them so they captured him too. They threw him into the Solitude jail but he saw that the wall in his cell was crumbling.He knocked it down and it fell, leading a way out. He finds a chest with his belongings in it and picks the lock. He opened it and takes his stuff and escapes. He crossed the border to flee at Darkwater Pass but was captured along with some Stormcloaks. To his surprise Ulfric was there. Unfortunately, his hands being bound, he couldn't claim his revenge. As his head was on the chopping block a dragon came attacking providing a way out. Aldr took Hadvar's side and escaped jail again. As he escaped he took this as a second chance and continued on his life as a adventurer. Later Aldr finds out he is Dragonborn a man able to speak the dragon's language at ease and absorb their souls. On a quest he is attacked by a Dragon priest and kill's it. He obtains it's mask while digging through it's ashes. Aldr decided that he'll try to clear his name by joining the Civil War in Skyrim aiding the Imperial's. To hide his face he'd wear the Dragon Priest mask he found. He'll be honored again and will be able to live without hiding. I'll start re typing this, to what I think sounds good.
• Nevik Drakel

  

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  February 9, 2015

  Aldo Oldon was High King Torygg's closest guard. The day Ulfric came and killed the King, people asked questions. How did he get in? How could this have happened with a guard right at his side? Rumors spread that the murder was an inside job. To prevent a riot, Aldr was thrown in jail, while the public was told that he had assisted Ulfric. On the day he was supposed to be publicly executed, he was sent to Helgen. There, just as he was about to have his head removed, a miracle happened. A dragon attacked, allowing him to escape with a man named Hadvar.

  Aldo Oldon was High King Torygg's closest guard. The day Ulfric came and killed the King, people asked questions. How did he get in? How could this have happened with a guard right at his side? Rumors spread that the murder was an inside job. To prevent a riot, Aldr was thrown in jail, while the public was told that he had assisted Ulfric. On the day he was supposed to be publicly executed, he was sent to Helgen. There, just as he was about to have his head removed, a miracle happened. A dragon attacked, allowing him to escape with a man named Hadvar.
• Rabiul Mazumder

  

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  February 9, 2015

  Wow your gd at this but it just seems like I'm copying you though I don't want to do that

  Wow your gd at this but it just seems like I'm copying you though I don't want to do that

• Rabiul Mazumder

  

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  February 9, 2015

  So should I take out the part where he goes to solitude jail?

  So should I take out the part where he goes to solitude jail?

• Nevik Drakel

  

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  February 9, 2015

  I don't know, the backstory you have there just seems kinda weird.

  I don't know, the backstory you have there just seems kinda weird.
• Omega

  

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  February 10, 2015

  I've been looking forward to this one. Really great job on Skyrimizing Corvo, who happens to be one of my favourite game protagonists, good job. I love the armor used I am trying this build out. +1 from me

  I've been looking forward to this one. Really great job on Skyrimizing Corvo, who happens to be one of my favourite game protagonists, good job. I love the armor used I am trying this build out. +1 from me

• Zonnonn

  

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  February 10, 2015

  Nice armour combo, I was really struggling to think of a combination that would fit Corvo.

  Just one thought, how about putting Eagle Eye as power, but only being able to use it when you acquire Krosis, like getting Corvo's Mask. Also, Imperials would be the most suitable race, as they look human, Imperials are the most cosmopolitan race, and would act with higher class, like being at court, and their power is a lifesaver at lower levels.

  Nice armour combo, I was really struggling to think of a combination that would fit Corvo.

  Just one thought, how about putting Eagle Eye as power, but only being able to use it when you acquire Krosis, like getting Corvo's Mask. Also, Imperials would be the most suitable race, as they look human, Imperials are the most cosmopolitan race, and would act with higher class, like being at court, and their power is a lifesaver at lower levels.

• ShinJin

  

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  February 10, 2015

  Nice work on this!

  I know it's been said a few times already, but that armor combo is pretty freaking sweet... I don't quite know why I never thought to put those pieces together before. The NG boots and gauntlets really do a phenomenal job of pulling the robes and mask together.

  It's also nice to see Lockpicking getting a little love. Frequently overlooked because, honestly, it's not all that hard to pick locks in Skyrim, but the extra help is nice, and it adds TONS to the RP :D

  Again, nice work on this!

  Nice work on this!

  I know it's been said a few times already, but that armor combo is pretty freaking sweet... I don't quite know why I never thought to put those pieces together before. The NG boots and gauntlets really do a phenomenal job of pulling the robes and mask together.

  It's also nice to see Lockpicking getting a little love. Frequently overlooked because, honestly, it's not all that hard to pick locks in Skyrim, but the extra help is nice, and it adds TONS to the RP :D

  Again, nice work on this!