Hi, Billy Mays here to say I like the overhaul! Some things I noticed were punctuation errors throughout the build. There were also some grammar errors as well. But aside from that, this does give us everything we need to know about the build in order to play it. I'm glad you took Chris and Fenrir's advice on the game-play section; it really helped it look better. Here is a like from one of your CB Hosts!
If you have problems with proofreading, add me so that I can PM you the proper corrections.
Hi, Billy Mays here to say I like the overhaul! Some things I noticed were punctuation errors throughout the build. There were also some grammar errors as well. But aside from that, this does give us everything we need to know about the build in order to play it. I'm glad you took Chris and Fenrir's advice on the game-play section; it really helped it look better. Here is a like from one of your CB Hosts!
If you have problems with proofreading, add me so that I can PM you the proper corrections.