I was debating if i should take the cut back the battle tactics section and add in more, less obvious signature moves, also im working on posting a list of potions i use most.
I was debating if i should take the cut back the battle tactics section and add in more, less obvious signature moves, also im working on posting a list of potions i use most.
Ok, I'll finally bite...
For a first build it's really good Penance, I like your opening paragraph regarding your reasons for posting...
Let me read some...
1. Build title feels odd! I enter titles like that into deathmatches alot! It's almost like you've spelled paladin wrong... Pick a new title for it would be my advise.
2. Images are wrong. That first image feels too old school, it's like it's week 1 of Skyrm and your noob character just got the twin souls perk and you're standing proud in the armor you forgot to upgrade. Dig out some awesome art for your main image and definitely lose that grainy 2nd image...
3. Page format feels too spaced out and list-like, it's the equivalent of someone reading you a single page of a book and then pausing for an hour between pages expecting you to enjoy the story. Snug it up neat and use bold for your headings.
4. Battle Tactics section feels exhausting to read. Keep chopping at it like it's a rough diamond until only the really shiny bits are left. Use images to back up/break up your text...
That's it for now! Keep polishing mate!
Ok, I'll finally bite...
For a first build it's really good Penance, I like your opening paragraph regarding your reasons for posting...
Let me read some...
1. Build title feels odd! I enter titles like that into deathmatches alot! It's almost like you've spelled paladin wrong... Pick a new title for it would be my advise.
2. Images are wrong. That first image feels too old school, it's like it's week 1 of Skyrm and your noob character just got the twin souls perk and you're standing proud in the armor you forgot to upgrade. Dig out some awesome art for your main image and definitely lose that grainy 2nd image...
3. Page format feels too spaced out and list-like, it's the equivalent of someone reading you a single page of a book and then pausing for an hour between pages expecting you to enjoy the story. Snug it up neat and use bold for your headings.
4. Battle Tactics section feels exhausting to read. Keep chopping at it like it's a rough diamond until only the really shiny bits are left. Use images to back up/break up your text...
That's it for now! Keep polishing mate!