. [ | General | ] .
Full Name: Vezaah Brag
Aliases: The cute one
Sex: Male
Race: Argonian
Class: Adventurous
Alignment: Neutral Good
Title(s): None (currently)
Age: 25 years old
. [ | Appearance | ] .
Skin Tone: Dark
Height: 6'1" (player.setscale 1.06)
Weight: Heavy
Build: Muscular
Eyes: Blue intense
Hair: ...
Apparel: By the moment, a tipical mages robes
Scars:...
Weapons: Stuff
. [ | Background | ] .
Special Abilities/Skills: Illusion, restoration and sneak abilities
Place of Birth: ?¿?
Religion: Atheits
Residence: None yet :(
Political Affiliations: Argonia and Orc.
Occupation: try to be a millonaire
Organizations/Factions: Thieve guild
Favorite food/drink: cream muffins
Interests: Alchemy, and Bounty Hunting
Flaws: Cold mind
Citizenship: Skyrim, Mor Khazgur
Relationships: Vezaah has many friends
Personality: Warm-hearted, funny, and mysterius
. [ | Backstory | ] .
Vezaah was rescued when he was a little lizar by the orcs of Mor Khazgur, these orcs admitted as one more of the family and they looked after him until he was twenty. In all those years, Vezaah was convinced that he was an orc, until they mother told him the truth, it was a shock for Vezaah. Now, he knew why he felt special. In that year, Vezaah left the village looking for adventures, he arrived at Soledad, in these big city, Vezaah met a dunmer, he was a pirate,and told him about the advantages of being rich and that by joining his crew Vezaah as a healer could get rich, too. Veezah, don´t like kill person, and he left the crew. Then, in Soledad he tried to be a gigoló,Vezaah is very handsome, he thought that the best way to be a rich it was sleeping with a rich old woman and forgetting to work, that was a good method. But he ended up leaving him when a man asked him to disguise himself as a maid, he offered a lot of money, but Veezah was afraid. He got back on a ship as a carrier, but the ship was wrecked, there began the adventure of Veezah.
. [ | General | ] .
Full Name: Vezaah Brag
Aliases: The cute one
Sex: Male
Race: Argonian
Class: Adventurous
Alignment: Neutral Good
Title(s): None (currently)
Age: 25 years old
. [ | Appearance | ] .
Skin Tone: Dark
Height: 6'1" (player.setscale 1.06)
Weight: Heavy
Build: Muscular
Eyes: Blue intense
Hair: ...
Apparel: By the moment, a tipical mages robes
Scars:...
Weapons: Stuff
. [ | Background | ] .
Special Abilities/Skills: Illusion, restoration and sneak abilities
Place of Birth: ?¿?
Religion: Atheits
Residence: None yet :(
Political Affiliations: Argonia and Orc.
Occupation: try to be a millonaire
Organizations/Factions: Thieve guild
Favorite food/drink: cream muffins
Interests: Alchemy, and Bounty Hunting
Flaws: Cold mind
Citizenship: Skyrim, Mor Khazgur
Relationships: Vezaah has many friends
Personality: Warm-hearted, funny, and mysterius
. [ | Backstory | ] .
Vezaah was rescued when he was a little lizar by the orcs of Mor Khazgur, these orcs admitted as one more of the family and they looked after him until he was twenty. In all those years, Vezaah was convinced that he was an orc, until they mother told him the truth, it was a shock for Vezaah. Now, he knew why he felt special. In that year, Vezaah left the village looking for adventures, he arrived at Soledad, in these big city, Vezaah met a dunmer, he was a pirate,and told him about the advantages of being rich and that by joining his crew Vezaah as a healer could get rich, too. Veezah, don´t like kill person, and he left the crew. Then, in Soledad he tried to be a gigoló,Vezaah is very handsome, he thought that the best way to be a rich it was sleeping with a rich old woman and forgetting to work, that was a good method. But he ended up leaving him when a man asked him to disguise himself as a maid, he offered a lot of money, but Veezah was afraid. He got back on a ship as a carrier, but the ship was wrecked, there began the adventure of Veezah.
That's an interesting backstory, almost like an argonian version of Orsinium's A Khajiit's Tale story in which a talking cat is rasied by the natives :) Those against the grain characters are good fun, and I like how you've fleshed Vezaah out here.
That's an interesting backstory, almost like an argonian version of Orsinium's A Khajiit's Tale story in which a talking cat is rasied by the natives :) Those against the grain characters are good fun, and I like how you've fleshed Vezaah out here.
Not a backstory you see every day! Awesome stuff.
I have a few requests though. The most pressing one is to change the title to 'Profile: Veezah', to make it fit in with the rest of the Profiles. Anmd for tags, you don't need to add a hssttag it's done for you, and you can also tag it 'RP:Profile' to be grouped with all the other profiles as well.
It'd also be nice to see some more detail to go a long with such a good backstory. For example, 'Stuff' isn't suitable, if he doesn't use weapons tell us that, but it needs to be clear. Apart from that, just a little more detail in each section would go a long way. Why does he want to be a millionaire, why is he an athiest, why does he wear mage robes etc? Loads of stuff to build on.
Not a backstory you see every day! Awesome stuff.
I have a few requests though. The most pressing one is to change the title to 'Profile: Veezah', to make it fit in with the rest of the Profiles. Anmd for tags, you don't need to add a hssttag it's done for you, and you can also tag it 'RP:Profile' to be grouped with all the other profiles as well.
It'd also be nice to see some more detail to go a long with such a good backstory. For example, 'Stuff' isn't suitable, if he doesn't use weapons tell us that, but it needs to be clear. Apart from that, just a little more detail in each section would go a long way. Why does he want to be a millionaire, why is he an athiest, why does he wear mage robes etc? Loads of stuff to build on.
Vezaah said:Thank you guys, I appreciate it, I'm sorry for my English, if it's a bit rough or poor, a greeting
No worries mate. I'm gonna change the title anyway for you, but you can get to the rest of it if and when you want.
[blockquote][b][url=/profile/Vezaah]Vezaah[/url] said:[/b]
Thank you guys, I appreciate it, I'm sorry for my English, if it's a bit rough or poor, a greeting
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No worries mate. I'm gonna change the title anyway for you, but you can get to the rest of it if and when you want.