[blockquote][b][url=/profile/Blooded]Blooded[/url] said:[/b] Hey, Overlord, nice to see a few face getting a build up. Pretty good for a first build(much better than my first, if you ask me). And I'm so glad you used silver weaponry. I feel it's so overlooked and underrated. The only discrepancy I see than Wu and Liss didn't mention is the lack of a perkspread. There's nothing technically wring with that because you do still have all the perks, but it would make it look a bit nicer and better organized. If you need help making one, I'd be glad to help. You can friend me and message me any time.[/blockquote]Honestly this isn't my first build, just my first posted here. This is about my 30th build lol. Most aren't as creative. I posted him up because of all the odd little in game machines he takes advanatge of like how the intense flames perk effects enchantments and even more obscure is the fiery soul trap which almost no one knows about lol

When i edit to give combat details i detail the perk spread for sure. Thanks for the heads up !

[blockquote][b][url=/profile/Noodles]Noodles[/url] said:[/b]

Hey! Welcome to the site!

This looks pretty cool although I'd add a gameplay section, a few paragraphs which explain how you combined all those perked skills into your play style. I see you've briefly explained some of these things in the role play section so you have a start. Other than that, I'd recommend adding some pictures. They don't have to look fancy, but a couple screenshots inserted here and there do wonders to your presentation. Other than that, it's cool. I especially like that you've shared with us the names of your enchanted gear.

[/blockquote]I can't do pictures. Im playing on an xbox360. I had to take that picture with a phone lol
I always name my gear ! Helps keep everything orginized in my invo if its all named generally the same too. Can't tell you how many times iv sold something i needed only to have to rebuy it for thousands more >_< Naming helps stop me selling it by accident.

[blockquote][b][url=/profile/WuYiXiang]WuYiXiang[/url] said:[/b] If you're worried about spelling and grammar due to your dyslexia, Grammarly does wonders with catching errors. It even comes with American/European settings. :D I abuse the app to no end. Thing must hate me by now.[/blockquote]Can you use it on a computer ? Im not on a moble.

[blockquote][b][url=/profile/WuYiXiang]WuYiXiang[/url] said:[/b] It's an app for Chrome, too.[/blockquote]Oh hell yeah im getting it then. With as mch as i do Written role Play i think ill end up abuding it more then you XD

[blockquote][b][url=/profile/Blooded]Blooded[/url] said:[/b] Hey, Overlord, ~[/blockquote] Is that a better by chance ?

Nice first build Ohmarow.  I especially like how you give us a level by level perk distribution.  Fiery Soul Trap is my favorite enchantment, and one i've used on many of my own Character Builds, though I've never taken the enchantment to this extreme, which honestly seems a bit unnecessary.  Do you really need 1000 charges?  I mean you'll be swimming in filled soul gems anyway seems like it would be nice to have a use for them, like recharging your weapons. ;P  I would also suggest adding some pictures, it doesn't have to be screenshots but some artwork that resembles the character can really help your presentation. 

[blockquote][b][url=/profile/Vargr]Vargr White-Tree[/url] said:[/b]

Nice first build Ohmarow.  I especially like how you give us a level by level perk distribution.  Fiery Soul Trap is my favorite enchantment, and one i've used on many of my own Character Builds, though I've never taken the enchantment to this extreme, which honestly seems a bit unnecessary.  Do you really need 1000 charges?  I mean you'll be swimming in filled soul gems anyway seems like it would be nice to have a use for them, like recharging your weapons. ;P  I would also suggest adding some pictures, it doesn't have to be screenshots but some artwork that resembles the character can really help your presentation. 

[/blockquote]Im not as concerned about filling gems as keeping the sword charged but yeah i suppose it would be nice to give them some sort of value besides enchanting alone. Perhaps give a Role player purpose to collecting them. Something along the lines of capturing evil souls to prevent them from retaking no bodies or something. Really the charge just comes with the build and im more shooting to max out the fire DPS.

Everyone keeps telling me to add pictures lol