I would respectfully suggest breaking up the two larger paragraphs into smaller ones for readability. You're a reader, so you should be able to tell when there's enough of a subject change to space, and indent. Other than that, I can't offer any criticism. Nice idea, and well executed, just a little clunky, which is purely superficial. +1 more...
I would respectfully suggest breaking up the two larger paragraphs into smaller ones for readability. You're a reader, so you should be able to tell when there's enough of a subject change to space, and indent. Other than that, I can't offer any criticism. Nice idea, and well executed, just a little clunky, which is purely superficial. +1 more...