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• Golden Fool

  

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  July 15, 2015

  Commander you aren't the only one :P

  Commander you aren't the only one :P

• Golden Fool

  

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  July 15, 2015

  I'm not sure if I should ask here or on my build (so should I do it in both places?)

  Does anyone have anything I should look at improving with my Drunken Mage? I want to focus on this one for the moment, and I can assure you I'll be back for the others... maybe 

  I'm not sure if I should ask here or on my build (so should I do it in both places?)

  Does anyone have anything I should look at improving with my Drunken Mage? I want to focus on this one for the moment, and I can assure you I'll be back for the others... maybe 

• Tim

  

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  July 15, 2015

  Yeah, I have the same question as Golden Fool, but for my build The Cleanser. I'm definitely ready to work on it and improve it. Any advice would be awesome!

  Yeah, I have the same question as Golden Fool, but for my build The Cleanser. I'm definitely ready to work on it and improve it. Any advice would be awesome!

• Golden Fool

  

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  July 15, 2015

  Anyone?

  Anyone?

• Deleted Member

  
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  July 15, 2015

  Honestly, for your Drunken Mage I feel it has all the qualities to be worthy of at least Exemplar, which is why I featured it. Nothing is innately wrong with it and, while there is always room for polishing in terms of writing style, your presentation, build idea, and mechanics are straight to the point. Does anyone have anything else to say to Golden?

  Honestly, for your Drunken Mage I feel it has all the qualities to be worthy of at least Exemplar, which is why I featured it. Nothing is innately wrong with it and, while there is always room for polishing in terms of writing style, your presentation, build idea, and mechanics are straight to the point. Does anyone have anything else to say to Golden?

• Gollum

  

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  July 15, 2015

  To put it bluntly, it is boring. The build looks phenomenal, but overall it is the opposite of exciting. You aren't selling it well. At all.

  Hope I helped

  To put it bluntly, it is boring. The build looks phenomenal, but overall it is the opposite of exciting. You aren't selling it well. At all.

  Hope I helped

• Gollum

  

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  July 15, 2015

  When I say it's boring I mean the writing is boring. It will be difficult to go back and revise, but it is worth it.

  When I say it's boring I mean the writing is boring. It will be difficult to go back and revise, but it is worth it.

• Gollum

  

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  July 15, 2015

  Well for one, the text is too big

  Well for one, the text is too big

• Golden Fool

  

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  July 15, 2015

  Any suggestions for how I could go about that? And what about the writing is boring?

  Any suggestions for how I could go about that? And what about the writing is boring?

• Gollum

  

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  July 15, 2015

  It just doesn't seem like you are very excited. Billy Mays had some of the best writing style ever, because he was literally trying to sell the build to you. I would look at the builds of BM () and No snakes aLive, because their builds are fun to read.

  It just doesn't seem like you are very excited. Billy Mays had some of the best writing style ever, because he was literally trying to sell the build to you. I would look at the builds of BM () and No snakes aLive, because their builds are fun to read.