This is a nice first build! I would space out your skills and perks a bit more, separate them into paragraphd, to make it easier to read; lose the choices in the Standing Stone (tell us what YOU picked!) and tell us when and where to use these special moves! The only other section I recommend you include is a gameplay section, to tell us exactly how you fought in combat!
This is a nice first build! I would space out your skills and perks a bit more, separate them into paragraphd, to make it easier to read; lose the choices in the Standing Stone (tell us what YOU picked!) and tell us when and where to use these special moves! The only other section I recommend you include is a gameplay section, to tell us exactly how you fought in combat!