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ToC: Lovaas se Yol

  • June 13, 2016

    Lovaas se Yol (That would be Song/Music of Fire *He says trying to show off his fancy Googling ability*) is a story following along three different paths, telling the stories of five different characters that may or may not meet along the way. 

    Sadras Indiri is the first of the characters, a Dunmer Warlock (think Mage that taps into magical powers without Magicka) living in the mining town of Raven Rock. She was recently imprisoned for, losing control of her powers, resulting in three houses (including her own) being burned down. She's incredibly powerful as a mage, but has little to no control over her powers, so if she tries to use too much all at once...Well that's why she went and burnt down those houses.

    Sadras is actually based off of my Hellfire Warlock WiP funnily enough, so reading the backstory there might give you some early clues towards her powers. 

    Sadras Skills: Conjuration, Alteration, Restoration, Destruction and Illusion

    Calurdin and his trusty bodyguard [*cough* I haven't actually decided her name yet...Something Orcy?] are our second set of characters, and this hundred and thirty-two year old Altmer is an accomplished thief, duelist and all around charming fellow. He spends his days doing what he wants, which mainly involved robbing the rich and giving to...Well I wouldn't call him poor, but I mean poorer? Okay so he steals for himself and isn't in anyway noble whatsoever.

    Calurdin's Skills: Pickpocket, Lockpicking, Sneak, Speech and Enchanting

    Orcy's Skills:  None - Fights only with her fists, with no other notable skills

    Ara-Sul and his dear friend Jairi make up the third story. Ara-Sul begins this story at the base of the Throat of the World, aiming to climb the seven-thousand steps in order to meet with the Greybeards as Dragonborn. He's the primary, and perhaps only hero of the story, being headstrong and more than a bit of a goody-two-shoes, he always aims to help those in need, and with Jairi along...Well those deadly Dragons better just watch out.

    Ara Sul's Skills: Heavy Armour, Block, Archery and Smithing

    Jairi's Skills: Heavy Armour, Block and One-Handed 

    Prologue 

    Chapter 1        Chapter 2        Chapter 3        Chapter 4        Chapter 5        Chapter 6        Chapter 7

    Editors:


    The Wing - Prologue, Chapter 1

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    June 13, 2016

    Calurdin and his trusty bodyguard [*cough* I haven't actually decided her name yet...Something Orcy?]

    I wouldn't worry too much yet over this. There's plenty of time 'at least this is how I see it' for the characters to have names ect. At the moment I refer to all the whelps as Whelps. There will be a time when I'm ready to sort out the names but that's a little way off yet. Just go with what you have and flesh them out later.

    The TOC is looking great DB. One thing I noticed is the three pictures are slightly out of alignment. Not sure if it's deliberate or not but it does catch the eye.

  • June 13, 2016

    A nice-looking ToC, there Dragonborn.  Well, that's to be expected, Mr. Character builder. 

  • June 13, 2016

    I wouldn't worry too much yet over this. There's plenty of time 'at least this is how I see it' for the characters to have names ect

    Yeah it's just something I'll need to sort out in the next couple of chapters, it just kinda threw me off when I realized I named everyone else's name and a bit of their backstory but had literally no idea what to do with her other than an Orcish Brawler...

    Glad it's looking good Sotek, I had way too much fun with those pictures(especially Ara-Sul's)  and I have fixed those pictures back into their proper alignment, didn't even notice that they were off like that so thanks for pointing it out 

  • June 13, 2016

    Haha, thanks Liss   I do like making everything look all nice and polished (And now that Sotek pointed out the alignment problem it's all good)