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Shadow's Embrace- TOC by Raltharian

• Raltharian

  

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  February 18, 2016

  Hello! My name's Raltharian! Now I know that i'm not the best writer in the world or the worst. I'm just here to write for fun and share my stories around and hopefully get a positive input. This story i'm "attempting" to write is about my main character from Skyrim who has the same name. The story is how Raltharian tries to forget and escape his criminal past, which leads him to wandering around the frozen and beautiful land of Skyim. Although he tries to escape it his past does come back to get him but thats in a later chapter, this relates to the title Shadow's Embrace.

                                                                                        Prologue

  Hello! My name's Raltharian! Now I know that i'm not the best writer in the world or the worst. I'm just here to write for fun and share my stories around and hopefully get a positive input. This story i'm "attempting" to write is about my main character from Skyrim who has the same name. The story is how Raltharian tries to forget and escape his criminal past, which leads him to wandering around the frozen and beautiful land of Skyim. Although he tries to escape it his past does come back to get him but thats in a later chapter, this relates to the title Shadow's Embrace.

                                                                                        Prologue

• Sotek

  

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  February 18, 2016

   Awwwooo

  Hello Raltharian.

  I've added a few tags to your TOC which may come in useful.  #Long, Raltharian, S.E. When you get the chance and your story develops, think about adding a few pictures to this. They make it more eye catching which will help grab interest in your writing.

  If you are happy with these two tags 'Raltharian, S.E'. then you really want to consider adding them to each of your chapters.

  If you have any questions or you are stuck then don't hesitate to ask me.

  Sotek, Loyal Hound Of Hircine.

   Awwwooo

  Hello Raltharian.

  I've added a few tags to your TOC which may come in useful.  #Long, Raltharian, S.E. When you get the chance and your story develops, think about adding a few pictures to this. They make it more eye catching which will help grab interest in your writing.

  If you are happy with these two tags 'Raltharian, S.E'. then you really want to consider adding them to each of your chapters.

  If you have any questions or you are stuck then don't hesitate to ask me.

  Sotek, Loyal Hound Of Hircine.

• Ebonslayer

  

  Member
   

  February 18, 2016

  Add the link of your chapters to your TOC.

  Add the link of your chapters to your TOC.