I don't dislike path builds but I feel there isn't enough for each path to be a build alone. If you do a path build you should be able to take out the part just for the blood eaters and their lore and turn it into a build and frankly with this you can't.
I don't dislike path builds but I feel there isn't enough for each path to be a build alone. If you do a path build you should be able to take out the part just for the blood eaters and their lore and turn it into a build and frankly with this you can't.
Very well presented and thought out... and an excellent first build. I won't repeat what others have said about the lore other than this: you are by no means required to Skyrimize your builds. That said, builds that get too far into other universes, historically, tend to struggle.
As you mentioned earlier, the Viashino tribes could easily be a desert-dwelling Argonian race. Change the names of the desert to Hammerfell, and Bob's your uncle. You could also take your first paragraph and some of the other lore explanations, and use it as a note at the end of the build, so that people can still get an idea of where your inspiration for the build comes from, but not have outside lore interrupt their enjoyment of this very excellent build.
Just some ideas, but ultimately you know what you want from a build, and those decisions are entirely up to you ;D
Very well presented and thought out... and an excellent first build. I won't repeat what others have said about the lore other than this: you are by no means required to Skyrimize your builds. That said, builds that get too far into other universes, historically, tend to struggle.
As you mentioned earlier, the Viashino tribes could easily be a desert-dwelling Argonian race. Change the names of the desert to Hammerfell, and Bob's your uncle. You could also take your first paragraph and some of the other lore explanations, and use it as a note at the end of the build, so that people can still get an idea of where your inspiration for the build comes from, but not have outside lore interrupt their enjoyment of this very excellent build.
Just some ideas, but ultimately you know what you want from a build, and those decisions are entirely up to you ;D
Don't worry, like I said before I can easily understand your point of view and I can always use constructive critics or other opinions to refine my build.
Don't worry, like I said before I can easily understand your point of view and I can always use constructive critics or other opinions to refine my build.
Damn it, you got me! I admit I threatened TwistedOrthrus and all the other hosts with my Bloodbending. They had no choice but to alter the results in my favor.
Damn it, you got me! I admit I threatened TwistedOrthrus and all the other hosts with my Bloodbending. They had no choice but to alter the results in my favor.