I don't see the resemblance between Serana, and Selena, except for similar spelling, and both being Vampires. I've never seent the former kill a werewolf, because the "Lycan" war isn't anywhere in Dawnguard. Also, Serana can fight, but she's not a "Death Dealer" at all. Okay, I guess both of their "fathers" could be considered "Vampire Lords" as well. However, again the only thing that either really has to do with the other is Vampirism, which is a pretty broad category. So, unless you're actually writing an Underworld themed build, I'd eliminate the allusion, as it's a distraction.
Other than that, good build, I like it.
I don't see the resemblance between Serana, and Selena, except for similar spelling, and both being Vampires. I've never seent the former kill a werewolf, because the "Lycan" war isn't anywhere in Dawnguard. Also, Serana can fight, but she's not a "Death Dealer" at all. Okay, I guess both of their "fathers" could be considered "Vampire Lords" as well. However, again the only thing that either really has to do with the other is Vampirism, which is a pretty broad category. So, unless you're actually writing an Underworld themed build, I'd eliminate the allusion, as it's a distraction.
Other than that, good build, I like it.