uuhg, hit a point where I think everything I write sounds like crap. Just going to slog through getting the next chapter written, then hope I find inspiration while revising. Hopefully this means I'm close to leveling up my writing skillz, unfortunately I disabled my UI so there's no telling.
uuhg, hit a point where I think everything I write sounds like crap. Just going to slog through getting the next chapter written, then hope I find inspiration while revising. Hopefully this means I'm close to leveling up my writing skillz, unfortunately I disabled my UI so there's no telling.
Finished the 1st draft of Chapter 20 (still needs a lot of editing), which will also be the end of Arc II I wasn't sure if I was going to keep the arc formatting and just have Arc II go on indefinitely, but the way this chapter turned out, it feels natural to start the next chapter as part of a new arc.
Finished the 1st draft of Chapter 20 (still needs a lot of editing), which will also be the end of Arc II I wasn't sure if I was going to keep the arc formatting and just have Arc II go on indefinitely, but the way this chapter turned out, it feels natural to start the next chapter as part of a new arc.
I usually don't go into much detail on what the characters physically look like (sometimes none at all), so I was wondering how that has affected you as reader. Do you have trouble visualizing them? Have you read something later on that overhauls your first image of them? What do they look like to you?
I usually don't go into much detail on what the characters physically look like (sometimes none at all), so I was wondering how that has affected you as reader. Do you have trouble visualizing them? Have you read something later on that overhauls your first image of them? What do they look like to you?
You're doing fine with the description, though one that made me chuckle was Trebonde and Tyranus' spar. Amari watching two sweaty, muscled guys duking it out. It didn't change my view of them, but I found it amusing. You did describe their physiques, which even I do.
That's a thing I like about your description, when you do describe, you tend to do the body as well, and your bodies tend to have more variation.
You're doing fine with the description, though one that made me chuckle was Trebonde and Tyranus' spar. Amari watching two sweaty, muscled guys duking it out. It didn't change my view of them, but I found it amusing. You did describe their physiques, which even I do.
That's a thing I like about your description, when you do describe, you tend to do the body as well, and your bodies tend to have more variation.