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The Diary of An Argonian Shadowscale Named Sakarea Caeseus! Journal Entry One:

  • Posted by Darren Richards April 8, 2014 - 401 views

    The day is Sundas, 17th of Last Seed, 4E 201. I tried my luck out in Cyrodil. I joind th Thievs Guild there first and even stole the lengendary mask of the gray fox, however i soon got bored of the thef lifestyle and went to join the Infamous Dark Brotherhood. Damn that Cicero was ANNOYING!

    All he would talk about is his precious night mother! I fulfilled a few contracts and a few "special" jobs and eventually got the title of Shadowscale. I'm not sure if this was because i was unknown to the world or because I could sneak myself out of an Imperial prison and take out a few of the guards before they even noticed i was gone!! That all in the past now.. I was captured by the idiotic Imperials along with a man Named Ulfriic Stormcloak and Ralof.

    I hear there is a kid named Aventius Arentino trying to contact the Dark Brotherhood In the city of Windhelm.. I might start there if i really need some money!

Comments

7 Comments
  • Xeelus
    Xeelus   ·  April 8, 2014
    All the other people who commented basically summed it up. And I know, sometimes we have awesome ideas, but we aren't sure of the best way to transfer them from our heads to writing! Definitely think some more about what you'd like to accomplish- it could...  more
  • Dawnbreaker1021
    Dawnbreaker1021   ·  April 8, 2014
    Life of an everyday Skyrim player
  • Shimazu
    Shimazu   ·  April 8, 2014
    Think of this argonian as a real person. Ask questions of your story, paint a picture which you want the reader to see, a reader doesnt want to hear what he/ahe did, they want to be there ! They want to see it.

    Create motives for your charact...  more
  • Soneca the Exiled
    Soneca the Exiled   ·  April 8, 2014
    Darren, Tae pretty much summed up the criticism I have concerning this. But this is too short and chaotic, and is only occupying space, pushing down other entries of higher quality. I strongly suggest you delete this, because when people see your name on ...  more
  • Tae-Rai
    Tae-Rai   ·  April 8, 2014
    I would definatly advise planning it out some more. Work out how you're going to tell the story rather then winging it. Good luck!
  • Darren Richards
    Darren Richards   ·  April 8, 2014
    (Reply to Tae-Rai's Comment)
    I do have to agree that both spelling and grammar are not one of my strong points.
    I wrote this journal entry before i did my introduction and decided to blog it to see what response it got which i do appreciate.more
  • Tae-Rai
    Tae-Rai   ·  April 8, 2014
    If you don't mind, I was to give you some constructive critism.

    Your grammar and spelling is quite shocking. There are multiple errors and each which make very difficult to understand your blog.

    For a journal entry, this is quite...  more