Kostas Blackeyes's Stories Of Grolin The Dwemer (Part 1)

  • "GROLIN!,come here you good for nothing! "Shouted with anger the Master inventor....

    "ummm did you call me sir? "said grolin.." of course i did...tell me..what do you see? "the inventor asked grolin "um a dwarven spider worker?" wondered grolin . "really??tell me boy...do spider workers make sweetrolls? " asked the inventor."i guess not but its still usefull" said grolin whispering "NO ITS NOT!workers are supposed to dig not bake,its useless,and how many times have i told you not to spend time with the snow elves?" said the inventor "many times sir im sorry" said grolin disappointed "good,your dismissed .
     
    Grolin disobeyed the inventor and went to visit Eltor,the snow elves leader. "hello grolin my friend how are you?" said Eltor, "you are escaping...tonight" said grolin whispering ,"what are you talking about?" wondered Eltor,"you heard me..i have a plan" grolin responded , "lets hear it then"said Eltor, "ok i will make a distraction and you will run for the escape from the front gate , then i will follow you and we will bar the door from the other side" said grolin with enthusiasm . "sounds good, lets do it,Snow Elves you heard grolin...we are leaving TONIGHT!" .

     Grolin got in the middle of the market and shouted "THE DWARVEN SPHERES HAVE GONE MAD!THEY ARE GOING TO ATTACK US....EVERYONE TO THE ARMORY!!" shouted grolin scared . "you heard him GO" said the captain guard , in the middle of the confusion grolin and the snow elves managed to escape and bar the door.

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    "Wheres grolin?" wondered the inventor . "he sounded the alarm and told us to go to the armory" answered the guard . "WHAT? YOU STUPID SON OF A HAGRAVEN YOU BELIEVED HIM?? ABOUT THE SPHERES?!" said the inventor frustrated.. "oh  cheese" said the guard who realized theyve been tricked . "battle horn sound" , "damn it!the snow elves are gone!" said the guard captain , "i should have known that skeeverbrain kid would help the snow elves , send your scouts to search for him . And bring him alive" said the inventor..."earthquake sound"..........


    Part 2 coming soon,stay tuned

Comments

3 Comments
  • Kostas Blackeye
    Kostas Blackeye   ·  February 18, 2013
    i added spacing corrected the u to you and corrected the dot thingy with space
  • Guy Corbett
    Guy Corbett   ·  February 18, 2013
    An interesting idea but it def needs editing so it reads a little better. 
  • Liucks
    Liucks   ·  February 17, 2013
    Also, I think it's better for you to use proprer grammar, for instance: instead of saying "u", say formally "you"