Character story Idea

• Posted by Dale Garrett July 18, 2012 - 907 views

       Hey guys I know I haven't been on in months.  I have a reason for that though!  I had tons of stuff going on in my life, crazy teachers, ADD tests, taking care of my dogs, even crazier teachers.  I finally got back on, and am thinking of starting a story!  In school, since about maybe 1st, 2nd grade I have been repeatedly praised for writing and I have quite a few stories in my mind!  Just don't expect screenshots, that's quite impossible with a PS3.  Just wondering what you guys want. 

       I was thinking about a guy who was heading to skyrim from a country called Drellia by it's people, but by the language of Tamriel Atmora.  While on the way learning the language of Tamriel, because his family sent him on his way across the Sea of Ghosts.  Tamrielic and Drellian languages share some words, but now many.  The way he learns is that on the long journey he brings along a man who has been to skyrim and hails from Drellia.  The knowledge of that land is a strictly kept secret of the Drellians.  It's a year and a half long journey because they go along the outskirts of the sea, eventually reaching Tamriel.  Ysgramor himself was a Drellian, but the men and women who he brought with them are natives of the land slightly southeast of Drellia.  The knowledge of that land is long forgotten.  Ysgramor decided to erase all knowledge of the lands north, in case they decided to take them over. 

       The reason his parents cast him out is that Drellia is rampaged by wars.  The Emperor was killed, and the 3 Shiu's (states) are mercilessly killing each other.  It's about 20 years after the Alduin incident, and people say the dragonborn never returned from the heavens.  Skyrim is the battle ground in a war between Hammerfell and Skyrim.  He goes there and turns the table of the war.  What do you guys think?   I know this was posted incomplete but my computer failed like that.  What do you think?  Is it a good story?