The Hero's Tale

  • Chapter 1: The raid 

    It was a normal Wednesday evening when it happened. I was only six, a nord and lived in Riften. I was helping my mother in the shop when I hear screams and clashing of swords. My mother rushed me up stairs and hid in the bedroom . Then it fell silent. But not for long because suddenly someone smashed though the front door. A man ordered "spread out and find the boy". I was scared stiff. then one bandit stormed into the room and alerts the others they found us.  

Comments

3 Comments
  • Ben
    Ben   ·  July 16, 2012
    ok sorry I Ran out of ideas and wondered if people like would enjoy reading it if I posted more
  • Eviltrain
    Eviltrain   ·  July 16, 2012
    You have me intrigued. Seriously, very few words but well done. But this isn't a story, it's a vignette. So either put it all out there or...
  • Todd
    Todd   ·  July 15, 2012
    I suggest adding MUCH more content, and a heavy reorganizing. ad pictures and add a lot more stuff. Then repost it.