Conan the Cimmerian 1: From captivity to freedom

  • Conan the Cimmmerian born in the land of Hyboria far away from Tamriel, some would say it is a completely different world. "Conan hated by the rich loved by everyone else" I come from a long line of traditional barbarians, born in a battlefield and the son of a blacksmith. I knew no childhood, by fifteen I was a well respected warrior destroying my first outpost, after which I was struck with the idea of exploring and earning my own money and power. Quest after quest, kill after kill, woman after woman, and I killed many powerful wizards. I've led men into battles, even killed some of my own myself. 

    I found myself in chains in a new land, I care not what is going on, I just want glory and riches. Our wagon was attacked and I managed to free myself and I escaped with a fellow barbarian. He seemed to know where we were going and we made camp near some standing stones. The next morning we walked northeast of our camp and came to a small town where his sister let me stay with her until I could manage myself. 

    I asked around for information on a local mine, looking for some materials so I could make my own sword, a young guard pointed me in the right direction and warned me of some bandits that make their camp there. Lucky for me I kept my dagger, I managed to sneak behind the guard at the entrance and slit his throat, looted him of what gold he had and moved forward. Once inside I avoided a rock trap and eavesdropped on the bandits who were talking of the security which was child's play to someone like me. The bandits split and I killed one after he fell asleep, the other seemed to have heard and managed to find his friends body. I hid in the nearby shadows and waited for him to head towards the nearby bridge which gave me the opportunity to kill him. I mined what minerals there were and headed back to town.

    After I managed to get my bearings I used the skills my father taught me and made a great sword and was able to trade what items I didn't need for some clothing and some armor. I was now ready to make my move....and this land of Skyrim had better be ready for it's first Cimmerian.

Comments

15 Comments
  • Duncan Hall
    Duncan Hall   ·  April 21, 2015
    I am a huge fan of Conan. Simply because you wrote Cimmerian makes me think you either saw the 2012 or 13 version only or read the books. In any case I advise you to watch 1980s original movie and read the books. I am actually attempting to make a Conan b...  more
  • Eviltrain
    Eviltrain   ·  July 16, 2012
    Ha Sorry! I've really got myself going. You wrote:
    I asked around for information on a local mine, looking for some materials so I could make my own sword, a young guard pointed me in the right direction and warned me of some bandits that make their...  more
  • Eviltrain
    Eviltrain   ·  July 16, 2012
    Ah sorry, right now I'm full of the imaginations so i want to add one more. If this post was written this way because you didn't want to bore your readers with the opening sequence, than you aren't being creative enough. If Conan was facing a dragon, He w...  more
  • Eviltrain
    Eviltrain   ·  July 16, 2012
    Definitely, this very much reads like a summary rather than a fully fleshed out tail. You can either edit it or leave it behind. Even if some of the comments are sparse, I think everyone can tell there's a story here. The problem perhaps is simply a lack ...  more
  • Mattimao1239
    Mattimao1239   ·  July 14, 2012
    Thanks guys :) I am going to keep trying, it's very clear in my head but as I type it down I seem to be leaving parts out of it or putting too much in. As I go along with my story I'll make sure to pay more attention :)
  • Arike The Redguard
    Arike The Redguard   ·  July 13, 2012
    yes very good idea but very hard to understand don't give up though good job
  • Todd
    Todd   ·  July 13, 2012
    It's an original idea. Keep trying and eventually people will read!
  • Mattimao1239
    Mattimao1239   ·  July 13, 2012
    Gotcha :)
  • Todd
    Todd   ·  July 13, 2012
    I don't expect you to. Just try separating it into more organized paragraphs and you'll have an interesting story, but at the moment it just seems jumbled and hard to read.
  • Mattimao1239
    Mattimao1239   ·  July 13, 2012
    I am not going to give up on this one.