Right, that should read properly now.  Remind me to proofread better next time

That looks fine. I'm looking forwards to the next chapter.

I'm sending you a PM

Personally I liked the fact that it was in a book. That added a nice touch to it and it isn't overly long so it fitted really well.
You might just be able to adjust the second (Book) without having to touch the others.
Addig a text option migh...  morePersonally I liked the fact that it was in a book. That added a nice touch to it and it isn't overly long so it fitted really well.
You might just be able to adjust the second (Book) without having to touch the others.
Addig a text option might open it for more readers. But I'll be reading the book version.  

This is what I get for doing this at 3 in the morning   I'll correct ASAP.
Is it easy enough to read?  I was thinking of adding a text version as well for anyone who didn't like graphical format.

This looks and reads great. It's a really different aproach well done.
On the down side and I really hate to be the bearer of bad news. The second book has a paragraph which is duplitated.
the doulbe section starts with ...
I'll probably...  moreThis looks and reads great. It's a really different aproach well done.
On the down side and I really hate to be the bearer of bad news. The second book has a paragraph which is duplitated.
the doulbe section starts with ...
I'll probably have to do something...
The end of the double paraghrath ends at
I can't afford to be bleeding coin on daily expenses.
don't get disheartened, you've done a great job with this..