Through The Eye's of a Survivor: crimes voice

  • as told to go to a fort on top of the throat of the world. High Hrothgar, were a clan of men meditate there voice. I was given housecarl named Lydia. She was to clumsy so she stayed at Dragon's Reach. As I left Whiterun once again I nearly forgot about armor. I was wearing hide armor, im really like light armor because of my fast agile style even though im alot stronger than I appear. So, as I ran to whom I was told the best smith in Whiterun, Eurland Gray-Mane, a bunch of Redguards talked to me about a lady? I shuned them of but I will find the lady in future if I ever have time. I collected elven armor just in time. This High Hrothgar is important surprisingly, there plaques next to the stairs. I should study these if I'm the dragon born. As I complete my first ritual with the Grey Beards I learn of they power we have and meditation that is put into the voice. I dicide to meditate with them. Through a day of meditation I feel whole and relaxed. My journy towards The horn of Jurgen Windcaller is put apon me, I travel back to Whiterun and ride a carriage to Solitude. I find my way to the leader of the Imperial Legion. I heavily support the Legion, so I decided to join the army. I was able to join and gain light armor. I pay again for Whindhelm, because I heard there inns are best. Probably because the weather is bad so warmth is a need. I rest up before traveling towards the horn. On my travel I ran into 2 bandits that killed a man I crouch down and took out an ebony bow I aimed for the an Imperial facing away from the Orc walking towards me I shot my arrow and the man die without pain. The Orc didn't realize his final day was today I ran near him and slide under him taking him down shooting his knee. I took out my orcish knife and my elven sword. He layed there "You couldn't fight me." Thr Orc grunted.I threw my knife at his chest before hacking his throat. I took the coin they had, animals probably stole it. I also took a paper that showed a small bandit camp. Well I know my new task and, what is Skyrim becoming. I will stop crime whatever means necessary. I stood on the mountains as much as possible so I could get the advantage. I finally got to the camp. 4 bandits, 1 Argonian, 2 Nords, 1 Breton, and 1 Dark Elf. They all were facing away from each other. Guarding the camp I suppose. I shot the Dark Elf and no one heard it. I jumped down and landed behind the Breton and killed him quickly putting him behind a tent I then stabbed the Nords placing them down. I stood silent behind the Argonian before I jumped and plunged my sword through him. I heard a voice of a Khajiit say im coming out I didn't know what tent. He came from behind me and triped me, he jumped on me I kicked him off as I jumped up. I dropped my sword as I need to kill him close quarters or he would easily dodge my attacks. I tried to stab his neck he caught my hand and sliced my stomach with his claw. He threw a high kick and I returned the favor by catching it and cut his knee making him fall. I jumped on his neck breaking it. I walked to the inn nearby and patched up my wounds, ate, and rested. I left and not to long after a man was trying to get money from a woman I asked him please stop. "Go away before you lose an arm and I gain one." He replied. "I'm giving you one last warning." I said. He grunted and threw a punch at me and I yelled at him and he flew 70 yards away. He yelled "fine I'll go away just stay away." Check out other Through The Eye's of a Survivor everyday at 1:00 eastern time Through The Eye's of a Survivor: questions

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  • Borommakot
    Borommakot   ·  February 5, 2015
    This is really hard to read because of the lack of formatting. Most folks won't invest the time to really dig into such a large block of text to see what's happening. Like Arvis said, try to fix the grammar/capitalization/spelling, and break it up into ea...  more
  • ProbsCoolerThanYou
    ProbsCoolerThanYou   ·  February 5, 2015
    There's some promise here but you should fix some spelling and grammar mistakes if you want to be noticed.