Nao replied to a comment on Nao's blog CoTD, Book 1 - Chapter II: Left for Dead: Thank you so much for the comment and the correction. I don't mind at all; it just means it'll look better for future readers :P Glad you're enjoying it!
September 30, 2017
Nao Well, like I promised, chapter 2 is up! Managed to buckle down and finish it so I don't feel as bad about procrastinating for homework lol.
Faelireth awoke with a gasp that echoed throughout the room, resonating the same fear and anguish occupied in her breath. The light from above seared her eyes. Pain palpitated in her head steadily with her toiling heart. The p...
DeltaFox
And you return with an epic chapter once again. Great work, Nao!
September 29, 2017
PawsAs before, I appreciate the way you describe things using simile and metaphor. It's too early to tell, but I wonder if the thematic pattern will hold - so far both chapters have started with pain, and in terms of narrative I thinks that's quite clever whe... moreAs before, I appreciate the way you describe things using simile and metaphor. It's too early to tell, but I wonder if the thematic pattern will hold - so far both chapters have started with pain, and in terms of narrative I thinks that's quite clever when dealing with multiple characters. Like it's a musical, and while each has their own theme and story, there is a similar motif running throughout. Or maybe I'm overthinking In any case, I like your Bosmer archaeologist, Faelireth. Feel sad for her being betrayed so cruelly less
September 29, 2017
FlamezSwordHello Nao! I'm new to your page, and I'll have to get acquainted with the whole story being that I enjoyed this excerpt so much. The simile and metaphor descriptions, as Paws stated, is a fantastic way to convey story...
Also I... moreHello Nao! I'm new to your page, and I'll have to get acquainted with the whole story being that I enjoyed this excerpt so much. The simile and metaphor descriptions, as Paws stated, is a fantastic way to convey story...
Also I'm a grammar Nazi when I read, so in paragraph 20 where Synda is apologizing to the main character you have 'apologizes' (instead of past tense 'apologized') Hope you don't mind me correcting things
Nao
Thank you so much for the comment and the correction. I don't mind at all; it just means it'll look better for future readers Glad you're enjoying it!
September 30, 2017
Sotek
Awwwooo Nao
Might I suggest a change for the text coloring? As it is it's a struggle to read so this will automaticly put readers off which would be a shame.
Sotek Loyal Hound of Hircine
June 26, 2018
Nao Soooo sorry for my absence on the vault. I've been terribly busy recovering from an illness and having to catch up on schoolwork. Chapter two should be up soon. Almost done!
Nao commented on Paws's photo: This is gorgeous, Paws! Stunning and pleasing to the eyes. Have any tips for a newbie photographer like myself? I'm not very good at taking screenshots.
"… thus does Merid-Nunda [ride? slide?] across the rainbow road from end to end, at one end stretching the dragon, at the other end compressing him …."
"… thus does Merid-Nunda [ride? slide?] across the rainbow road from end to end, at one end stretching the dragon, at the other end compressing him …."
Interesting build! The title is eye-catching and attention getting. Like you say, it's odd to see the words 'paladin' and 'Sithis' together. That is what grabs our attentions. Good job!
I like how Caerwyn's morality follows Sithis', if that makes...
Holy moly! This is really good! I like the idea of playing an elderly character; I don't think many people really imagine an old person when they think of the Dragonborn. Nazius' backstory was compelling and entirely interesting. The explanation for why h...
This is impressive work! I love all the little things that you add to make her more human, in spite of her desensitizing career. I especially loved the tattoos and the meanings of her tattoos.
As Pickle Rick says, citizenship is essentially where...
About Me
I am an aspiring writer who is also interested in pursuing music therapy as a major in college. I was first introduced to the Elder Scrolls series in 2008 about two years after Oblivion was released. Said game was the first Elder Scrolls installment I ever played. After I became obsessed with the series, I played Skyrim three years later, then ventured into the earlier games, including Morrowind and Daggerfall.
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Fallout 4, Fallout New Vegas
Paws
Just a quick reminder that ESO's Fifth Anniversary Event starts at 10:00 EDT (15:00 BST). Remember to consume cake every two hours for that sweet xp buff :)