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The Sunflower Manual commented on The Long-Chapper's blog entry: Like I said when I read the draft, I really liked the new complexity this gives to Vingalmo both in the context of the past narrative and the present-time narrative. Always a new layer to their hate when the old-friends-and-rivals-turned-bitter-enemies re... more- September 7, 2020
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The Sunflower Manual replied to a comment on The Sunflower Manual's blog Gathering Clouds, Chapter Two: Haha, thanks, Phil. And don't worry, the timeline should at least be loosely defined very soon, and concretely defined at the end of this arc. I do appreciate the kind words! Yeah, I tried to stick more to the debate aspect of a proper tinvaak and might h... more
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The Sunflower Manual commented on The Long-Chapper's blog entry: Okay, woah, the imagery in the beginning was nuuuts, and
still so rich and laden with the iconography of Straag! The importance of Crystal-Like-Law
comes through much better in this iteration of the story, just from the much
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The Sunflower Manual replied to a comment on The Sunflower Manual's blog Gathering Clouds, Chapter Two: The Lis Approach? Good idea. I had that problem in the first version of the story too. And thanks! From here on out, I'm going to be bouncing on and off lore like a madman. After going on an equally long binge of both ES lore and Fate, I'm feeling more co... more
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The Sunflower Manual likes the blog Straag Rod: Book 1, Part 1, Chapter 6:
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The Sunflower Manual replied to a comment on The Long-Chapper's blog Straag Rod: Book 1, Part 1, Chapter 6: Pffhaha, I remember that conversation. You're very welcome, it was fun to discuss the moves.
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The Sunflower Manual commented on The Long-Chapper's blog entry: The dialogue was great as usual and all the in-universe references are great. Goldpact Knights and sleepy Vignar, Koor being the best doggy, and haha, I remember that discussion about Delphine pulling a knife on Albee here. This works way better now, read... more
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The Sunflower Manual likes the blog Straag Rod: Book 1, Part 1, Chapter 5:
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The Sunflower Manual commented on The Long-Chapper's blog entry: This right here is why Straag works so well; the characters
and the way they interact are all fleshed out superbly. None of them are
one-dimensional, and the racial tensions are all written in a way that’s interesting
and believable. And of course, the se... more -
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The Sunflower Manual replied to a comment on The Sunflower Manual's blog Gathering Clouds: Chapter One: Thank you, Phil. Your in-depth, sincere and genuinely heartfelt comments are more encouraging than you might know, and it's the kind of feedback from a reader that keeps me writing. I'll have the next one up soon, please look forward to it then.
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I have some familiarity with your work from reading various short stories and one-offs, so I have enough experience to know what to expect. As such, trying to think of what I liked best about this chapter is a hard call because there isn't anything to dis... more
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I'm very, very curious to see what you've changed.
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Sotek:
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Can you give me a link to your T.o.C. in TSC so I can catch up with your story please.
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The Sunflower Manual commented on ilanisilver's blog entry: Sorry I got to this a bit late, school just started up and everything. But wew, the sexual tension is really ramping up now. Phil already talked about the internal dialogue and the conflict but the sense of place was also really nice throughout the story ... more
