I will admit to not quite understanding many of your choices within this build, in fact I don't understand most of it.
I am semi-familiar with the main source of inspiration for this build, not perfectly I'll admit but I have at least heard of the guy. Why Shouts at all, from what I can see they were chosen purely to make this character more powerful, no Roleplay Reason given and to top it off, literally no reason that I can see in the entire build...
Next up is the use of magic, you list the following spells (Whirlwind Cloak, Courage Spells and Scrolls) and then mention Ash Runes within the next few paragraphs. Why is this not listed with the others but more importantly why do you use spells at all. As with shouts you give no real reason for them and it most certainly doesn't fit the inspiration for the build (unless Date was a magician in disguise, if so I apologize). It seems, again like you're doing it simply because you can, and I'm not going to bring up that Whirlwind cloak would have cost you around 250+ Magicka to cast, roughly that is.
Next up I cannot understand the reliance on 7 weapons, yes they all have some reasoning to be there in the fact that a Samurai would have used them, but no Samurai would have kept all of them on him at once, maybe you didn't but if that is the case then you probably should have explained it more. But not even covering the source material, how would you carry it all. You claim to have chosen the Lord Stone, you mentioned the Steed (with Aetherial Crown) but I'm ignoring that because you haven't said anywhere that you've used it or even done the quest (another problem, what quests does this guy do.) With that Stamina you would have around 400 Carry Weight which either mean you aren't picking up any loot/don't use potions at all or aren't bringing them all with you, a highly possible choice but something you should mention if it is correct.
My next little gripe is with Enchanting. It's very common in your builds Chris that you quite often pick Enchanting up purely for overpowering your character. There is no logical reason to pick it up with this character as it is fairly powerful without it, the only enchantment I can see with any real use is Fortify Destruction, all of the other's could easily be done without and worst of all you have Fortify Block, for what reason is this here, this build, from what I can tell, heavily uses dual wielding and only uses Two-Handed weapons on horseback, it just seems pointless. Anyway you often seem to want to make your characters as powerful as possible (which is fine of course, don't get me wrong) but in this case you have a build that if anything should be pure combat skills (and speech). The reliance on Enchanting, Spells and Shouts just seems odd to me.
I know it might seem like I'm being an ass but this build makes little sense to me. You're probably going to ignore this because it isn't positive but I'm leaving it here anyway. The build is fairly illogical and seems to say "I'm going to completely ignore the material I have based it on, nah I'll throw in some quotes and sort of base the RP off of him". Again sorry if I'm being an ass with this but consider it constructive criticism, that's what it is.
I will admit to not quite understanding many of your choices within this build, in fact I don't understand most of it.
I am semi-familiar with the main source of inspiration for this build, not perfectly I'll admit but I have at least heard of the guy. Why Shouts at all, from what I can see they were chosen purely to make this character more powerful, no Roleplay Reason given and to top it off, literally no reason that I can see in the entire build...
Next up is the use of magic, you list the following spells (Whirlwind Cloak, Courage Spells and Scrolls) and then mention Ash Runes within the next few paragraphs. Why is this not listed with the others but more importantly why do you use spells at all. As with shouts you give no real reason for them and it most certainly doesn't fit the inspiration for the build (unless Date was a magician in disguise, if so I apologize). It seems, again like you're doing it simply because you can, and I'm not going to bring up that Whirlwind cloak would have cost you around 250+ Magicka to cast, roughly that is.
Next up I cannot understand the reliance on 7 weapons, yes they all have some reasoning to be there in the fact that a Samurai would have used them, but no Samurai would have kept all of them on him at once, maybe you didn't but if that is the case then you probably should have explained it more. But not even covering the source material, how would you carry it all. You claim to have chosen the Lord Stone, you mentioned the Steed (with Aetherial Crown) but I'm ignoring that because you haven't said anywhere that you've used it or even done the quest (another problem, what quests does this guy do.) With that Stamina you would have around 400 Carry Weight which either mean you aren't picking up any loot/don't use potions at all or aren't bringing them all with you, a highly possible choice but something you should mention if it is correct.
My next little gripe is with Enchanting. It's very common in your builds Chris that you quite often pick Enchanting up purely for overpowering your character. There is no logical reason to pick it up with this character as it is fairly powerful without it, the only enchantment I can see with any real use is Fortify Destruction, all of the other's could easily be done without and worst of all you have Fortify Block, for what reason is this here, this build, from what I can tell, heavily uses dual wielding and only uses Two-Handed weapons on horseback, it just seems pointless. Anyway you often seem to want to make your characters as powerful as possible (which is fine of course, don't get me wrong) but in this case you have a build that if anything should be pure combat skills (and speech). The reliance on Enchanting, Spells and Shouts just seems odd to me.
I know it might seem like I'm being an ass but this build makes little sense to me. You're probably going to ignore this because it isn't positive but I'm leaving it here anyway. The build is fairly illogical and seems to say "I'm going to completely ignore the material I have based it on, nah I'll throw in some quotes and sort of base the RP off of him". Again sorry if I'm being an ass with this but consider it constructive criticism, that's what it is.
