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Character Build: The Return of the Witch King

Tags: #Evil  #Falmer  #Battlemage  #Character Build Necromancer  #Character Build Vampire  #Rank:Bloodworks  #Race:Altmer 
  • September 22, 2016
    And for the record, I wrote the Roleplayin part like a tale because firstly it looks different, secondly it describes best the motivations, personality and ambitions of the character, giving his own story. Of course, you can choose to play in a different way. I just thought it would be a different way to describe the character... Thanks for the like and the comment! :D
  • September 22, 2016

    This is a good first attampt at a Character Build deseonia.  I would suggest making some changes to the format of the build, and getting rid of some images that really don't add anything to your presentation (in fact much of them take away from it).  In the end you just have a lot of empty space that doesn't look good from a presentation point of view.  I would suggest getting rid of the sections RACE thru EQUIPMENT delete the images and the titles and instead list them all as part of one section that lists the different pieces to the build (see below for an example of what i mean).

     

    Race: Altmer (eons of breeding have made you indistinguishable from an albino Altmer), white hair and blinded eyes. Vampire Lord

    Stats: Health=40%; Magicka=30%; Stamina=30%. (At level 51: Health=300; Magicka=300; Stamina=200; level 81: Health = 400; Magicka=400; Stamina=350)

    Stone: The Steed (until Conditioning perk), then The Lady (Health and Stamina Regen on day as Vampire) or The Ritual (roleplaying)

    Shouts: Become Ethereal, Dragon Aspect, Slow Time, Summon Durnehviir, Soul Tear and Unrelenting Force

     

    This would greatly clean up your presentation and make it easier to read and understand.  I would even suggest that you get rid of the skill section images as well, they don't really tell me anything about the build's character or playstyle and SE adds the white block of empty space which is annoying.

     

    Primary Skills

    ConjurationAll the necromancy perks, 'cause your pets are going to take the aggro while you're hitting your enemies from the shadows.

    DestructionsIs your first damaging card. After conjuring a pet (or two wth Twin Souls), let them take their aggro while you use your lighting magic to, literally, desintegrate your foes. Yes, I know you are descendant from the Snow Elves but you rather choose a darker form of magic (what's even darker than make those who oppose you burst?). Desintegrate is going to leave you without bodies to raise; that's why I highly recommend the Soul Cairn summons.

    IllusionAll frenzy spells are amazing to make your enemies kill themselves, letting you with lot of corpses to raise as your minions, without even having to make an effort. Also fear are for roleplay

     

     

    Your first image and last image work the best and I would suggest using this style of large center aligned images to break up the text, specifically in the Roleplay section.  There are tons of great pieces of artwork on Malekith so finding more for your build shouldn't be too difficult. 

    In short sometimes "less is more" and in this case I think that holds true.  Anyway +1 from me.  Also I took the liberty to adjust your tags so they properly link to the archives.