I unfeatured your build. I'll give you my like because as a first time builder you brought this to the minimum standard. However keep reading all that material I gave you and improve your build.
I unfeatured your build. I'll give you my like because as a first time builder you brought this to the minimum standard. However keep reading all that material I gave you and improve your build.
Good effort but there's quite a few things hurting this build right now.
You have a bunch of quests listed but almost no explanation for why this guy is doing them.
I can't comment on how much sense your roleplay and backstory make since I'm no expert on lore. I can say that the large wall of text that is your backstory will drive people away from reading it.
Second major flaw is the lack of any explanation for your perk choices. The gameplay section is also another massive wall of text few will want to sit through and read.
Good effort but there's quite a few things hurting this build right now.
You have a bunch of quests listed but almost no explanation for why this guy is doing them.
I can't comment on how much sense your roleplay and backstory make since I'm no expert on lore. I can say that the large wall of text that is your backstory will drive people away from reading it.
Second major flaw is the lack of any explanation for your perk choices. The gameplay section is also another massive wall of text few will want to sit through and read.