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Character Build: Kyne

Tags: #Rank:Bloodworks  #Skyrim  #Kyne  #builds 
  • December 29, 2014


                                                       Kyne                                          

                            kyne is the Nordic goddess of the Storm,she is most commonly referred to as Kynareth. Kyne is held in the highest esteem by Atmoran and Nord hunters, a bit like a nord warrior queen. 

    Race:nord

    Major skills: Archery, Alteration, Smithing.

    Minor skills: Light armor, One Handed.

    Shouts: Storm call, Cyclone, Whirlwind Sprint, dragonrend.

    Spells: Whirlwind cloak, Dragonskin.

    Armor: Dragonscale Armor.

    Weapons: Dragonbone Bow, Dragonbone Daggers.

    Doesn't matter if you use light armor or heavy.

    Made for a level 43 player.

    Perk spread

    http://www.ign.com/builds/the-elder-scrolls-5-skyrim?d=00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000010101110100000000001111110000511111110000000000000000005010000021511111311

                                                                   Roleplay

    When in large battles first use your flesh and cloak spell then go in with storm call and guns a blazing using cyclone to pave a way for you to whirlwind sprint through, quickly dispatch hard enemies with your bow, then when cyclone comes around use it on the remaining enemies and kill them with your daggers.

    When in boss battles  sat off with flesh and cloak spells the quickly cyclone the boss and storm call if you want while he is down impale the boss with daggers then when it gets up use your whirlwind sprint to get away and use your bow until cyclone recharges. 

    Dragons are fun use your flesh spell then dragonrend and your bow simple.

    When your not in combat your are a strong independent nord woman dont be pushed around but with kids and undrunk beggars you are a kind soul filled with love.

    Gameplay 

    dont be evil that is not you, always stand for whats right, be an outpouring of love except to evil like the thalmor you will be picking the storm cloaks, kill the dark brotherhood, dont join the thieves guild and all other guilds are fine join the dawngaurd and DONT BE EVIL.

    Kyne's strength use your cloak spell and charge with whirlwind sprint its fun.

    Hurricane use storm call and cyclone for maximum destruction.

    This is my first build so be nice                                             

  • Member
    December 29, 2014
    The roleplay you put down is more akin to gameplay. Roleplay should be, say, help the poor, kill all Thalmor, etc
  • December 29, 2014

    Thanks give me a sec

  • Member
    December 30, 2014

    Hello Ian! I deleted your other discussion since you've posted this. This is better but you should work on your presentation. You talk about gameplay in the Roleplay section and roleplay in the Gameplay section. If you want to improve it, I suggest you head over to the Charatcer Building Group's Main Page, click the banner entitled "How To Make A Character Build" and read the guide. I'm also going to leave Dragonborn's comment from your previous discussion to help you more.

    "Hey there Mate, I'm here to inform you that based upon the Character Building Group Rules and standards that this, well it's not a build. You've barely got an idea laid out and you're missing some of the key things that make a character build, the first of which is the proper name (Character Build: Kyne is what yours should be based on the site rules, which I'll link here http://theskyrimblog.ning.com/group/character-building/page/group-i...)

    The second major thing you're missing is a perk spread, we don't know what perks you've used so how are we going to recreate the build, sure we can tell there is 42 perks but they could be any perks, this is one of the most important things you could possibly include.

    After that you're missing a Backstory and Roleplay. People like builds to be interesting to play, this has no roleplay so most people here will be turned away from playing it because they're not sure what to do to make it more interesting. I reccomend working on this by answering a few questions, What do they do? Why do they do it? those sort of questions. Above all look at other builds to get a firm idea of what the standards are.

    The next thing you need is a Combat and Gameplay section. How does this character approach combat?, what type of strategy does it use? These are the sort of questions we need answers for to play this properly. For Gameplay cover how your character acts outside of combat, what do they do in their spare time, what type of quests do they do, why do they do them. Again I reccomend looking at other builds tl get a firm idea.

    Basically at the moment this is barely an idea, it's an equipment list with some shouts and magic on it, not much to it at all. Look at other builds, figure out what people tend to do when making a build and then fix this up. Take this as advice, this is your first build and everyone screws up the first time, usually because they don't know what do yo, just do what only a few people do and learn from this build and improve you own skills over time."

  • Member
    December 30, 2014

    I think you should research Kyne more. Kyne is a nature loving goddess, not really the warrior type.

  • Member
    December 30, 2014
    Kyne is the warrior wife of Shor, mistress of storms and blessed of Nord hunters
  • August 28, 2017

    Firstly, there is a template in the Character Builds section, located Here I would suggest you pay a visit and use it to improve your presentation. Secondly, I would also suggest you use this as it will help you research more into Kyne as a deity. This build has the potential to be a decent build, but you need to flesh it out more, you literally leave almost everything up to the user and a build is supposed to have a much tighter focus. Also, your pictures are broken. I understand this is a build from 2014 and probably things were different then but the build has so much potential these days.. It would be interesting to see it revived.

  • Member
    August 28, 2017

    BaldurAnthology said:

    Firstly, there is a template in the Character Builds section, located Here I would suggest you pay a visit and use it to improve your presentation. Secondly, I would also suggest you use this as it will help you research more into Kyne as a deity. This build has the potential to be a decent build, but you need to flesh it out more, you literally leave almost everything up to the user and a build is supposed to have a much tighter focus. Also, your pictures are broken. I understand this is a build from 2014 and probably things were different then but the build has so much potential these days.. It would be interesting to see it revived.

    The author for this build hasn't been around for 3ish years, Baldur, so unfortunately I doubt they'll see your advice. You're right, it could be better and has some real potential, but I doubt anything will come of it. You could always create an offshoot build though!

  • August 28, 2017

    Zonnonn said:

    BaldurAnthology said:

    Firstly, there is a template in the Character Builds section, located Here I would suggest you pay a visit and use it to improve your presentation. Secondly, I would also suggest you use this as it will help you research more into Kyne as a deity. This build has the potential to be a decent build, but you need to flesh it out more, you literally leave almost everything up to the user and a build is supposed to have a much tighter focus. Also, your pictures are broken. I understand this is a build from 2014 and probably things were different then but the build has so much potential these days.. It would be interesting to see it revived.

    The author for this build hasn't been around for 3ish years, Baldur, so unfortunately I doubt they'll see your advice. You're right, it could be better and has some real potential, but I doubt anything will come of it. You could always create an offshoot build though!

    Funny you should say that... I was actually going over a build to do with Kyne earlier today..