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A Certain Shine

  • Posted by Ben W February 13, 2016 - 1,088 views

    A Certain Shine

     

    Stored away within this humbled pouch of mine

    It does not compare to that which freely comes with me

    For within this little pouch of mine

    Is nothing more than something free.

     

    That which follows me freely

    Adds a specific light in my life

    Something worth more than any contract

    Something that no price can ever buy.

     

    In the solitary life that which belongs to me

    Company comes and company goes,

    Being alone is something that takes hold

    No matter how old.

     

    A certain shine pierced through my lonesome viel,

    Bringing life to me once again.

    A certain shine that follows me freely

    Is someone I can never pay back.

     

    To one as fearsome as I to find someone

    Is a shock to one and all for sure,

    That she would stay with me at all

    Is a relief to my weary soul.

    To the one that made me feel something other than who I am

    I give my love, and thanks, to you

    My beloved shine of mine

    My beloved Serana.


    Xian-Krie, 4E 202

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  • Paws
    Paws   ·  February 14, 2016
    That's awesome. I admit "that pouch of mine" made me think it was a euphemism.
    Trouble with Serana is that she reminds me of a TV model who I sometimes see when I "accidently" channel surf over to those channels. I can't have her as a companion anym...  more
  • Ben W
    Ben W   ·  February 13, 2016
    It pertains to my blog, Ebon. This I have it (in my mind) maybe a few weeks after the final chapter of it. 
  • Ebonslayer
    Ebonslayer   ·  February 13, 2016
    Is this in any way connected to your blog? If so I might have to check it out, this is gold.
  • Ben W
    Ben W   ·  February 13, 2016
    Had to write poems a lot in my middle school and high school so this crap is easier for me.
  • A-Pocky-Hah!
    A-Pocky-Hah!   ·  February 13, 2016
    Well looks like I'm the only one making a short story for this week.
    Problem about me writing poems is that I'm still at a beginner's stage in learning.
  • Lyall
    Lyall   ·  February 13, 2016
  • Ben W
    Ben W   ·  February 13, 2016
    @Lyall
    It's worth it to try something that doesn't need pages and pages in a word document 
  • Ben W
    Ben W   ·  February 13, 2016
    ...I'm not going to ask about the 240+ year old virgin priest thing but I suppose I can relate. 
  • Lyall
    Lyall   ·  February 13, 2016
    Man, EVERYONE is writing poems. Maybe I'll have to get in on the action...
  • The Long-Chapper
    The Long-Chapper   ·  February 13, 2016
    Oh, I don't speak the language, I just have to write in it. My fault for making my character a 240+ year old virgin priest poet thing. LOL
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