Clash of Steel - A Skyrim Snippet

  • For Samuel

    (Written 1/11/11)

    “Forward!!” the commanding officer shouted to his troops that lined the ridge. As one the line surged forward, the pounding of their horses’ hooves upon the ground sounded across the plain like a low rumbling thunder gaining momentum and sound as they beared down on their target.

    From the road on the plain, the lead carriage rider looked up excepting to see the dark ominous clouds that signalled the rains but the sky was spotless, the twinkling stars shone brightly out here in the country side. Still the thundering would not cease, and then carried along behind it was the barely perceptible sound of a war cry. Startled the man swung around to face the now recognisable sound of horses and the small battalion of men on their backs. “Stormcloak incoming!!!” quickly reaching behind him he grabbed the cord for the bell attached to the back post of the carriage and rung it as hard as he could. Like a brushfire the alarm swept down the convoy line, the trained warriors reacting to the bell swiftly began to form ranks on the attacking side.  “Steady on! Prepare for contact!!” the commander shouted from his own horse at the front of the defenders as the Stormcloaks continued their deathly charge.

    Time seemed to slow down just seconds before the two groups collided, and then like the breaking of a wave against the rocks they converged into a hellish swarm of terrified horses screaming men and painful groans. The Imperials held their own against the initial assault, it was one of the many reasons they were a leading fighting force in all of Tamriel. But despite their courage and training it could not withhold against the might and numbers of their rivals. The battle did not last long, with the majority of Imperials on foot they were eventually struck down. “Leave no prisoners!” the commander shouted down to his troops as they began systematically killing off the entire surrendering and wounded enemy. “Search the carriages, burn anything you can’t carry.”

    Soon the whole convoy was one long streak of flames down the deserted road. With victory high in their heads none of the warriors noticed a small shadow slip out from under one of the burning frames and scamper off into the woods a small bundle clutched in their arms.

Comments

5 Comments
  • Batman
    Batman   ·  April 21, 2012
    for the most part yeah I can do that, just write little stories. its the longer ones that was hard I lose focus really quickly and its often hard to pick it back up again.
  • Kynareth
    Kynareth   ·  April 21, 2012
    This is a really great concept, Charlie, and must have been fun to write!    I imagine you just throw yourself into the writing, kind of like this battle, without worries for long term character or plot development, though all of your entries are so rich ...  more
  • Batman
    Batman   ·  April 19, 2012
    @Piper I figured at the time that was how the 2 forces would treat each other, and you can see something similar to it ( though not as big as a caravan) when Stormcloaks and Imperials clash in the wild.
    @Ricardo yup they are just moments in time, no...  more
  • ricardo maia
    ricardo maia   ·  April 19, 2012
    I checked the word snippet on dictionary. so those tales are just fragmented pieces of stories never fully developed.
  • Piper Jo
    Piper Jo   ·  April 19, 2012
    I love the imagery of the last paragraph.  Reminds me of the scenes on TV from the First Gulf War, except in the woods instead of the desert.