The Heart of a Beast: Chapter 4-1 A Night to remember

  • As Dragon goes to order us some food, I sit around and try to observe the tavern. It is relatively dark, with the exception of a few lanterns spread across the building, and a small fireplace in the middle of the main room. Music is playing by the local bard, a Dark Elf woman. The music sounds amazing, it was a song called "The Tale of the Tongues", a song about the fall of Alduin and the celebration of the Dragonborn... Whatever either of those were. Dragon comes back with some food; some beef stew for me and some vegetable soup for her. As we sit and eat, a man in black robes walks up to us with a bottle in hand. "Here friend, want a drink?" He asks with a smile. "What is it?" I ask, noticing its in a orange bottle. "It's ale, want some?" He asks again with the same smile. "What's ale?" I quietly ask Dragon. "It's a drink." She tells me. "Why are you just giving away alcohol sir? What's your name?" "My apologies, my name is Sam Guevenne. I have just been given a small fortune from my family and I wish to share it with others." He finishes by taking a swig of ale. "Tell you what... Order whatever you want on the menu, it's on me." Before either Dragon or I question this, he pulls out a bag. When he opens the bag, it is filled to the brim with coin and gems. We walk up to the barkeeper and order a few bottles of ale. After a few minutes, the barkeeper returns to us and handed us our drinks. As i eye the drink i notice the strange color of it. I ask Dragon if there was something wrong with it, but she tells me that it was how all ale looked. We took a drink from our ales. I love the flavor of the drink, it is hard to describe the sensation I am getting from it, but it feels... Great. We order another bottle, and another, and another... Until all we see is blackness. I struggle to open my eyes, everything I look at is blurry. I look down and see that I'm fully covered and in bed, I don't remember going into a bed... What's worse was I realized I was in nothing but my small clothes, what happened to my armor? But then, as I looked around the room,searching for my gear, I feel something moving at my side... As I look down, I see it is Dragon, she is asleep and also in nothing but her small clothes... What happened last night?! (Yes this one is short, but I hope to make up for that in the next chapter. Stay tuned)

Comments

21 Comments
  • Matt Feeney the New Guy
    Matt Feeney the New Guy   ·  March 14, 2013
    Yeah, I get what Amrathyx and Christopher are saying. I know the characters better than most, so it's less noticeable to me. I gave you my opinion on what you should focus, maybe run it over with Christopher again, he knows more about this than me :)
  • Bryn
    Bryn   ·  March 13, 2013
    Currently on hiatus, not done though. This is told in vignettes and has no real plot. It is overall trying to show the adventures of Korin and Dragon in Skyrim, and how Korin deals with the treat of killing someone while in beast form, or being hunted...<...  more
  • Bryn
    Bryn   ·  February 11, 2013
    Yeah, setting is difficult for me to write out... I know what the setting is... But the reader doesn't, so that screws me up. And I understand how this one felt jarring, to be honest... This would probably be my worst chapter... Worst then the dream one.....  more
  • Dragon
    Dragon   ·  February 8, 2013
    Well I am Texan...
  • Skyler
    Skyler   ·  February 8, 2013
    Dragon has an arsenal to kill you with...
  • Dragon
    Dragon   ·  February 8, 2013
    *pops up from the shadows and cackles madly blowdart gun in hand*
  • Bryn
    Bryn   ·  February 8, 2013
    Dragon I have talked, everything is going to be ok- *hit by blow dart* not... Again.... *unconscious*
  • Bryn
    Bryn   ·  February 8, 2013
    Plus you can't kill me, I'm already dead
  • Bryn
    Bryn   ·  February 8, 2013
    Dragon,I sent this to you before and you didn't say you had a problem with it, you just said "and you wonder why people call you a flirt" so don't get angry, you didn't voice your opinion and it's too late now
  • Dragon
    Dragon   ·  February 8, 2013
    *grabs her knife and creeps up behind Brynjolf*