F*ucking Blue Danube


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    A waltz on the wasteland,

    She spin round, soar, whirling, then land.

     

    Blasted is the world,

    Two hundred years post-annihilation.

    Erased by a fiery swirl,

    A total atomization !

     

    The sky’s blue,

    The mutants are green.

    No water in view,

    The land is lean.

     

    No chance you get back that pump,

    You see, all’s fucked up, Cinderilla.

    Have a pretty dress covering your rump

    And join in the dance, provided you got the stamina !

     

    Even though the bomb had long burst,

    You never know what’s hidden under the rust.

    So be careful and go light feet,

    One misstep and you’ll look like shit !

     

Comments

3 Comments   |   Legion and 5 others like this.
  • Sotek
    Sotek   ·  December 31, 2016
    Hmmmm
    I think next time you say that you aren't much of a poem writer a few of us in TSC will end up biting your tail. You've definitely got a flair for this even if you don't think so.


    I wholeheartedly agree with Teineeva here...  more
  • Teineeva
    Teineeva   ·  December 22, 2016
    Interesting, I like it, but as someone who has no clue as to how to write a decent poem I'll leave the more critical evaluation to more proficient people. I would like to say however, that if you were to decide to write some more fallout related stuf...  more
    • Molicha
      Molicha
      Teineeva
      Teineeva
      Teineeva
      Interesting, I like it, but as someone who has no clue as to how to write a decent poem I'll leave the more critical evaluation to more proficient people. I would like to say however, that if you were to decide to write some more fallout related stuf...  more
        ·  December 23, 2016
      Thanks for telling me. I'm not versed in that art, defenitely. But I wrote it to accompanie a video capture sequence I made a couple of days ago and inspired me this. It will no doubt be available soon.