deal with the dagon part3


  • music too accompany the piece: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=googWn5OuTo


    Deal With The Dagon Part 3

    As I enter dear riverwood Im startled too see,
    Well wishing fools Stood there welcoming me ,


    What fools  ha they believe I'm like them
    Whether dutiful wife or trustworthy men,


    They have no clue of my power within
    But soon they will bleed out their well wishing skin,


    I start with a frenzy as only I can
    And rip out their hearts and they beat in my hand,


    They attack in their numbers  but as I have said
    It bothers me not how many live's I leave dead,


    “Oh the joyous sound !,…. the tone!”
    Of a well sharpened sword meeting sinew and bone,


    “STOP” shouts a guard  frantic and scared
    “ha” I laugh  my work wont be impaired,
    “kindly good sir please do remember
    Where I leave your head after I dismember!”,


    I lick the blood from my lips as the screaming subsides ,
    I turn on my axis and open my eyes ,


    “oh what a mess I have made this  fine day”
    “I really should learn not too play with my prey”,


    I look around at the beautifully bloodsoaked maze
    So as I entered this place I shall leave in a blaze,


    Onward too whiterun there we will see,
    Me and my father complete the final decree….

Comments

6 Comments
  • Titan
    Titan   ·  June 6, 2012
    kind of a shame that i never got to finish this but its kind of cool that no-one will ever have closure on this story and can be the author of the finale themselves
  • Kynareth
    Kynareth   ·  April 29, 2012
    One of the things that I really enjoy about this series is the juxtaposition of this delightful rhyme with such polite and refined language, and then it describes death and utter destruction.  The music was perfect to create fear, and then leaving off wit...  more
  • Titan
    Titan   ·  April 29, 2012
    Currently working on the next installment and possible finale
  • Titan
    Titan   ·  April 27, 2012
    too bilal and ricardo: i thank you guys so much for pushing me too continue too create,
    and kynareth you guys also have great interest in this character,
    im just so proud that one of my creations had any effect that i just had too respond lol<...  more
  • Titan
    Titan   ·  April 27, 2012
    guys i was lazy and under pressure for results.
    but that makes me free from blocking  my consult's,
    too the fans i thank ye for  being honest  and robust
    and whomever is in charge giving me an honest thrust,

    so i say too my ...  more
  • ricardo maia
    ricardo maia   ·  April 27, 2012
    Perfect timing + perfect music + perfect picture = hilarious results. Pearls like the politeness in  “kindly good sir please do remember / Where I leave your head after I dismember!”, or the childlike innocence in “oh what a mess I have made this  fine da...  more