The Banishing of the World Eater

  • The black wings unfurled like a storm cloud in the skies,

    Whilst the air was filled with great anguished cries;

    His dark maw breathed death over his rebellious foes

    And their Voices, once mighty, were forever froze!

     

    Then from out of the blizzard rose the One-Eye,

    His arm's might unmatched and his victory nigh;

    By his side Golden-Hilt and Felldir did stand,

    Latter with his scroll and former's death close at hand.

     

    The Nords with Voices true the Shadow they felled

    And the mountain did tremble under the beast it held,

    The World-Eater bellowed and fire was his ire

    And, though valorous, Gormlaith was expired.

     

    One-Eye was strong, but the black scales stronger;

    His arms, though mighty, could not hold any longer,

    The Old One did cry and above his head he held

    The Elder Scroll and the Bane of Kings was at last expelled!

     

     

    The fate of the Firstborn the dragons beheld;

    Their wings like thunder as they fled, as though impelled,

    The shackles of the Wyrm were shattered at last

    And in fair Skyrim the great war had passed.

Comments

9 Comments   |   Legion and 3 others like this.
  • Mortiferous
    Mortiferous   ·  July 8, 2017
    Thanks, Sotek! I thought some of the lines were a little too cheesy in places, but I'm glad you think so, it was what I was going for.
    • Sotek
      Sotek
      Mortiferous
      Mortiferous
      Mortiferous
      Thanks, Sotek! I thought some of the lines were a little too cheesy in places, but I'm glad you think so, it was what I was going for.
        ·  July 8, 2017
      You've got my curiosity. What specific parts did you think were a bit cheesy?
      • Mortiferous
        Mortiferous
        Sotek
        Sotek
        Sotek
        You've got my curiosity. What specific parts did you think were a bit cheesy?
          ·  July 8, 2017
        "And their Voices, once mighty, were forever froze!"
        " Latter with his scroll and former's death close at hand."
        " His arms, though mighty, could not hold any longer,"
        • Sotek
          Sotek
          Mortiferous
          Mortiferous
          Mortiferous
          "And their Voices, once mighty, were forever froze!"
          " Latter with his scroll and former's death close at hand."
          " His arms, though mighty, could not hold any longer,"
            ·  July 8, 2017
          Howl in the Hunting Grounds do you find these lines cheesy? They fit perfectly with the theme and where they are situated within the verses. 
          • Mortiferous
            Mortiferous
            Sotek
            Sotek
            Sotek
            Howl in the Hunting Grounds do you find these lines cheesy? They fit perfectly with the theme and where they are situated within the verses. 
              ·  July 10, 2017
            I'll take your word for it, I just think the some of the rhymes a little bit forced.
  • Sotek
    Sotek   ·  July 8, 2017
    I have to admit it has me thinking of an inn where tired warriors and hunters are all sitting around in the evening while a bard sings this out. 
    The quality though.....
    It could fit just as well in a lords hall with nobles sitting at di...  more
  • Mortiferous
    Mortiferous   ·  June 1, 2017
    Thank you, D3LTA, I'm glad you liked it.
  • DeltaFox
    DeltaFox   ·  June 1, 2017
    I can imagine this being singed in-game. Great Work.
  • Mortiferous
    Mortiferous   ·  May 30, 2017
    If something is wrong, just tell me, I haven't posted in a long while.